All Comments on 'Just For You Daddy'

Kandie

All the words seems to be in the their right places. Was I moved?, "Almost". But then, the more a person reads the harder it becomes to be moved. Was my one eyed friend moved ?. Yes he cried, but just one tear. Would I read your work again?. You bet!!. I Should have given you four stars but old one eye said "What the heck give it all to her, so I did and he twitched. Five stars it is!.

Since she is only his step-daughter and his wife/her mother died, perhaps a continuation can be made on this very erotic story about how they fall in love and decide to start their own natural family?

well what can i say, an excellent peice of work, i havent read such a masterpiece in a while. keep it up kandie and put some more of your utterly brilliant work online.

Enjoyed that - could almost taste your excitement running down the inside of my throat!

SO FAR THIS IS TURNNING OUT TO BE JUST THE KIND OF STORY I LIKE NOW I SEE THERE IS A CHAPTER 2&3 SO I COULDN'T ASK FOR ANYTHING ELSE,AS LONG AS YOU DON'T TURN OUT LIKE SO OTHER STORYS I'VE BEEN READING

I GIVE THIS A 5 STARS PLUS LETS SEE WHAT THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS WILL

BRING,AND TO SEE IF ITS WORTH WHILE READING BUT SO FAR GREAT STORY

AND LOTS OF SEX&LOVE THIS COULD BE ALMOST REAL LIFE EXCEPT YOU SAID IT WAS FICTION TO BAD......................................."R".........................................

many nights still I have loving sex with my step daughter who is now considered the wife....been 15 yrs now

I liked the sexual inuendo as the passion rose.

But then it seemed overly direct from the daughter.

Perhaps a continuation of the massage would have been a better outcome to take them over a difficult edge.

Most enjoyable, all the same, but a longer build up to achieving what they both wanted would have been better...without either of them being direct.

Just my opinion though and see you got good feedback all the same.😊🙏🙏😊

Terrible. I’m guessing that English isn’t your first language?