All Comments on 'Just Friends'

Well written - with just the right mix of romance, first time jitters, raw honesty and of course love. Very well done - thank you!

I thought that this was not only a very well written story, but a pleasure to read as well.

Once again you have hit a home run. Do you ever strike out? Looking forward to your next great story. Keep them coming.

what a great story!!! I really liked it a lot. Thanks for the beautiful story and I'm really looking forward to read more from you.

actually worried that they might miss it. And that tells me a lot about your skill. - Chapeau!

You had me worried also, Beautiful.

Great Job with the story telling as always.

Perfect!!

~

Gary

(garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)

If Moog Player liked it well enough to comment on it, you definitely deserve the highest praise for your story. He writes a love story like nobody else that I can name.

I think this may be your best short story so far. I did enjoy your year long effort, about having to live through high school a second time. Keep doing what your doing. It certainly ain't too shabby.

Great story, Joe! You are indeed a talented story teller! Love to see some more romances similar to this one!

I have read several your stories, since I found you at Literotica. I may have even said was the best I had found on the entire site. I stand corrected. "Just Friends" has superceded any other that I have read thus far, and it will take one hell of a story for me to change my mind.

Written so well it brought back the feelings of being a senior in high school. Thanks.

This was so awfully sweet... lovely story.

gave it 5 stars simply for the great story, but mate don't you ever read back what you have written? at least proof-read the thing before submitting it on here or get a decent editor to look it over. its been an absolute pain to read through all the misspells and grammatical errors.

usually begins with 'just friends.' The couple just has to accept the truth of it when it happens. You've revealed how many romances get started.

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for posting.

people don't get it ... if you need to be in love you need to be friends .... true friends= true love...

to be madly in love you first of all have to be good friends then the love follows......

But PLEASE get an editor

Your grammar, mis-spellings, sentence structure and word usage completely stopped the flow several times

Yeah, I'm a Grammar Nazi, so live with it

This story is absolutely brilliant. It's witty, funny, hot and romantic all rolled up into one amazing story. I look for stories like this when I'm on this website, I absolutely love this story. Thank you for writing this.

I've always felt people with special talents should share them with the world. Thank you for sharing your story telling skills with us,

Sky.

kids? I have a very hard time with kids being serious EVEN if they know everything..........................or think they do............get a life comes to mind...................

Meet my wife when she was 17 and I was 21.

Celebrate our 30th wedding anniversary next month.

So don't be a sceptic it can happen.

in August,. So asshole of LIT eat shit as Bonnie would have said!!

Was going to write something about the comments . But hey it is now 2016 it will stand up in time. Well done! 10 stars = 100 %. Love you all! Bye. Greg.

I was 18 now wife was16 married at 18 and 20 just a couple of months shy of my21st birthday her 19th, 46 years in February.

It was a blind date!

We weren't quite so mature, but it was reality, not fiction.

Love this story!

I was a terrible English student; but you'r spelling is even worse.

A spell checker does not a writer make...

And do a read through before you hit "send".

Grammar, spelling, and syntax errors are not simply distracting, they force one to pause midstream to reread to ensure ones understanding. Suggest after completing a story that you put it aside to let it age and then reread with fresh eyes, this should reduce errors. As previous anonymous commenter noted, must not rely on spell-check.

Simple a great sweet story!!

People with complaints about grammar etc?

Just get over it. How can you ever enjoy a story

if that’s all you think about? College ruined you lol

Ed:)

This is just the latest in a long line of readers who really enjoyed this story. Keep up the great work.

It’s humourous & sweet.

I come back to it every so often for the love.

Thank you!

A little corny, a lot more unrealistic, and majorly more wonderful, sweet, satisfying and enjoyable story.

Comments from those who met wives when young are a fitting and precious addition.

Paul in Oklahoma

Despite the few errors, I loved the story line. I imagined Jerry with a little bit of sexy chest hair, and admired his consideration and compassion for Megan's small breasts. He did not want her to feel put down or inadequate. He is a gentleman. Hope they stay together, as they have worked through a bit of the difficulty here.

I had a FWB that I lived with a year latter she asked me why I was not seeing other people. I told her that when she started see other people I would too. 7 years latter she was killed by a drunk driver. We still were not seeing other people

1 on the list of many picks a writer apart BUT NEVER written a single story A$$ HOLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I gave up during the lame setup. Did I miss anything?

Gods this category is so 5 bombed. So mediocre

Dear JoeDreamer,

This is the third story I read which is full of 'in your face' grammatical and spelling errors, that make an otherwise a five star story appear less than perfect. Your story and thought flow is so good; I enjoyed each of the stories. But the spellings!!! Goddd!! I had read and reread multiple times to figure out what was being said — 'rapped' instead of 'wrapped', 'know way' instead of 'no way'. Atrocious misspellings. And I am not even a grammar nazi.

I am saying this as a well-wisher: Please get a good editor.

Jerry was an idiot for even agreeing to swop Megan with Greg just bcos his AH best friend needed to get laid!!

this is the worst story i’ve ever read

OK Joe I hate assholes who tell you everything that is wrong but do not one damn thing to actually help

Weelllll I am a whole bunch different, first of all I don't get really hung up about grammer grammper or pucntuation.

Read your work backwards. Brain is lazy shit, It thinks ow I just produced this and therefore I dont need to look at it and you whiz right on by whatever you are looking for. By reading backwards you will find a lot of errors because you are forcing brain to really look

BTW I was so popular in school that I didn't even go to prom. No one to go with

5

Wonderful tale! Loved it!

Naysayers are idiots, the romance was great. Chapter 2 is missing? Did you forget to post it??

I liked it. Greg was an asshole and you write quite a few stories with jerk offs who are ~’best friends’ and some of those ruin the story but this one needed a jerk off to set the situation. Some of your romances are misses but not this one. Good ending. Get a proof reader.

Wonderful story. Loved it all

Outstanding tale.

Another very, very, very enjoyable story.