by tabber
I suppose you will receive a few comments about this being too short. Well, everyone has their hang ups. I see that this simply told about the next significant event and didn't need more. So, It was fine for as far as it went..... Leave 'em wanting more.... Look forward to your next event.
Love this story, a complete fantasy of mine. Would love a neighbor like that. Love being outside naked and mutual masturbation is sooo sexy
As far as I can tell from Chapter 1, Rachel didn't know the man she was chatting to online was her neighbour, but in Chapter 2 she does?
Previous anon, you should re-read chapter 1, just sayin...
Can't wait for the next chapter. This situation is one I've thought of many times, love it!
Great build up....loved the first two chapters......although how he recognized her from Lit seems a bit strained. And Part 3......dunno, I like her taking command but maybe a bit more build up on it.
Still you capture the heat of doing all this in the neighborhood well