All Comments on 'Just the Six of Us Ch. 24'

Oh, my! I've missed this story so much. Fortunately, you value quality enough not to release the chapter until you were sure it was up to par. And boy, it was! I loved it. I'm looking forward to read the next one, hopefully not having to wait so many months again. However, I'm a patient person, so take the time you need again. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work! ^__^

I'm glad that Emma was the next sister to be reintroduced (she's my favorite) and I can't wait to see where you go from here. But don't feel like you have to rush to bring them back so quickly. He has 2 back at the moment and so I hope that he is content to sit on that while he makes plans. And I hope he plans something devious because it doesn't feel like Danni or Emma have been punished at all yet really.

Glad to see it back.. Great chapter..

But please don't tell me Emma is going to fuck Matt with Mike requesting it.. That'd make me sad :(

Mental,

Welcome back! It's great to have the six of them back in print and to see that the curse of chapter 24 has been shed. So, who was the sacrifice?

Dave

So nice to see a new chapter, thanks!

Glad your back with more chapters. I wished he woulda tortured Emma more cause she & Sarah were the worst when it came to torturing him. I was wondering how long it'll take to fuck Emma in her ass. I think she shoulda been the last to know he got his memory back. I kinda want to see her fuck Matt but I find it kinda weird that she wants to fuck someone else when she got more mad than anyone with the Ashley situation & was so against fucking Ash's brother too.

THANK YOU sooooo MUCH FOR RETURNING TO THIS STORY. i HAVE MISSED IT REPEATEDLY EVER SINCE THE LAST CHAPTER SO LONG AGO. grr drn caps lock, sry. Being disabled and trying to consecrate on typing and keeping my thoughts straight are not easy on all pain meds. BUT I was no more than a few paragraphs in and the whole story came flooding back to me, ty. Each page I turned seemed to bring a sorrow to me since I knew this chapter would soon be over and not sure when the next would come out. 8 yrs sitting here disabled and few things have captured me , This story did, ty. This and one other story started me to reading again. Please dont be gone this long again. I look forward to finding more chapters for this story, now to try and correct all the lil red lines lol/ bill

I have been looking forward to the next install me and been wondering which sister would be nice. Emma was a great choice. :)

I look forward to the rest of this sweet revenge.

I knew you and the Voice wouldn't forget about us. Great chapter and well worth waiting for.

Never doubted you for a second :)

i'm so happy because Ch. 24 is out. this was another good chapter. congrat.

but this anal thing makes me disappointed. i think this story was/is good without anal sex. Mike has 4 pussies, 4 mouths, 4 pair of tits to fuck, isn't that enough?

i hope you won't turn this good story into some kind of anal sex maniac bullsh*t.

(I'm sorry if my English is not good I'm not a native speaker.)

Yes. :-)

I am a little disappointed though. I thought Emily and Mike were going to church, don't remember that they weren't going to date. Was hoping to read about Emily and her Dad more.

I was wondering. Once a month or so, I have looked you up and I am really glad to see more.

There was a story from one of your editors a while back with a similar feel to this and I was wondering what happened to it. I can't remember the names involved: author, story name etc. The guy was moving into his uncle's old mansion with his aunt and cousins. There was a supercomputer involved?

Great chapter Mental. Love your work :~)

To the person asking about the supercomputer story, Zex has some problems with him family and such, so he deleted all of his stories & doesn't edit anymore.

please dont bring in outsiders for emma. the story is good enough as it is,

sid

Keep up the great work!! If possible, pass along to Zex the hope that he can get his issues resolved to the best interests of everyone involved!! Family is the most important thing in life!! I enjoyed his work as much as I am enjoying your work!!

im actually all for some meaningless maybe even almost faceless outsiders for emma, that control thing with her is so hawt.

but anything resolving in feelings or anything like that with an outside would be a mistake imho

You definitely didn't disappoint with this chapter.

Please don't be so late with the next chapter.

This is my male version of 50 shades of gray you keep making wicked awesome stories I will read them all promise.

@s0ck587: please do not compare 50 shades and this, it is an insult to Mentalcase.

This story has a far more interesting setup, better characterization, better writing and sex scenes that are actually hot.

All I want to say is keep up the good work Mentalcase; looking forward to reading more.

In all there are 24 chapters now, and you haven't lost me as a faithful reader yet! You manage to keep it interesting by adding new twists to the plot. If I could live in a story, I would choose yours. So, please. Please, keep writing more "Stupendously awesome" stories so that I may pretend that I'm actually living them. Nicely done, Sir. Nicely done.

Finally Chapter 24! Worth the wait, keep writing man, love the story.

...Intelligent writing is back on Literotica.DBB6

A reason to read Literotica has come back!

The next part if here. Happy days again... sqhead

Made my day seeing a shiny new chapter of this condensed WIN appear. Bravo, sir. Bravo.

Don't involve anyone else though, 'tis perfect as is. Emma being ordered to do whatever with him or the other sisters: extremely hot, adding random new people: entirely unnecessary. Adding new GUYS: insta boner kill and a potentially HUGE drop in interest in this story. Just my personal opinion of course, but I hope you keep it in mind lol.

Still at the end of the day it IS your story so I suppose you can write whatever you damn well please.

Six Stars out of Five! But PLEASE don't make us wait so damn long between chapters!!! It is TORTURE!

This last part of your chapter got me concerned. Talking about bringing other people into the mix. That would tear down everything you have built up in this story. I have seen so many stories destroyed by involving too many people and ruining the atmosphere and enjoyment of the original plot an characters. Please keep it in family only, otherwise the story will it a fast dead end.

Absolutely worth the wait! Amazing chapter, it made my day when I saw the new chapter posted! Excellent work as always! Hope you keep the sex between the five of them I personally don't want to see Emma with anyone besides mike unless its one of the sisters. But you are the creative so we trust your judgment. Hope to read chapter 25 before long. I will check back religiously until I see it!!!!

TO BLOODY SHORT I WANT 16 PAGE CHAPTERS AGAIN, WHEN I SAW IT I WAS LIKE YES 24 PAGES OF EROTIC INSESTUAL GOODNESS. BUT IT IS ONLY 4 :(((

Please don't bring others into their play... That is a definite turn-off for 87-93% ppl reading incest over here... The "whoever" should be within the family :/ It will absolutely destroy what I love about this series if u include others in the mix :|

I think that bring others into the mix is risky, but could be done and done well, particularly with Emma. I know a lot of people don't want it, but I think you'll do fine with it if you take it slowly.

My wife and I really loved the chapter. One thing we didn't like is the possibility of Emily joining in. I think it would be best if you just kept it all in the family. Please don't ruin such an amazing story by adding more people to the families lovin'. Great job.

In 24 chapters, you have yet to lead me wrong. Do whatever you see fit for the story. Glad to see your still plugging away at it. Thanks.

I never thought I would see another chapter so I'm very thankful.

Please don't stop writing for every fan out there your effort is indeed appreciated.

It was a very happy suprise to see a new chapter to the story. I was so happy I read it fast than went back and read all 24 over.

i love your stories glad your still on the old horse i thought you quit but then my freind told me that you made a new one so i read and i do think that emily should find out and blackmail mike to have sex with her just thought and keep up the gteat storie

I can't tell you how thrilled I was to see the new chapter up. Just like the sisters, though, I'm not certain if it was worth the wait or if I want lots and lots and LOTS more to make up for making me wait. *wink*

On the other hand, now I have to wait to find out if Mike will make Emma tease Matt... or just how he will "punish" boobs... er, Beth. Or if he will save Mommy Sarah for last and get all of the sisters involved in the final phase of his giving her the just desserts.

But, that's ok. When you can. No rush. None at all. I'll just be checking back about three timess a day.

i enjoyed new chapter . . please give more space for sensitive beautiful lovely beth so she can enjoy lot more with mike. . . ..

Have him fuck Emily

The last comment sounded like the voice kinda but anyway great chapter its been a long time but worth the wait.

I would pay you money to write these faster. Great chapter.

Man I love this story! Hate waiting so long for updates! I wish it had a billion chapters I could just continuously read.

Hey, great chapter, lots of new possibilities. Emma's possible anal adventures very much a turn on. But what will become of the new variable Emily? Will

Beth's horny inner voice lead her down the anal path too? Not to tell you how to write but keep it simple, variables Matt, Missy, and now Emily need to go. Stick to the comedy and partial tragic, and sexual lifestyle you have forged for these 5 lives. Again great chapter keep writing.

Every time i went to the internet the first thing i did was check to see if chapter 24 was finish.

Ps. Love all the chapters read them all 5 times each Cant wait for chapter 25

Great Chapter......

Waiting for the next one. Please don't make us wait that long....

You are my best author on this site by far, i have waited for ever for this chapter, and boy was happy, you havent lost your touch. cant wait for Ch. 25.

In India there is a saying better late then never. seriously waiting for the 25th ch.

i have read ur all ch. at least 10 times. i have them in my mobile book reader every time

the day finally came... and so did i. dude i didnt even get past page 1 i was so excited

I have been an absolute fan of your work from start to finish, please keep up the great work!

It's your story, but I think making Emma not wear panties outside of the house (all the time) will make her look cheap to other people. Especially since she's still in college, and not yet a woman on her own. Just a thought..

The story has been GREAT! ... so far. This can't be the way it ends. You've not finished Mike's restarting sex with Beth, or Sarah. What happens on the camping trip? There are too many loose ends to tie up. Come on, finish up a great book-length story.

I like the character development, and the fact that sex is an integral part of the story, but not the whole plot. This is really an erotic, romantic tale, where the sex is essential to the story line.

I'm loving the story the sex is hot but I also enjoy the story as a whole as well.

Honestly, it's an amazing work. If not for the fact that the whole concept of the story is so taboo, I could easily see it at the front of a bookstore. It's really well written, great character development, great plot mechanics, and hell if I saw the accident with Mike coming. Again, I've got to say that the character development is amazing. Keep up the great work, just finished 1-24 over the course of the last two days, it'd be a major shame if you ended at 25 though.

I have been waiting for ch. 24 ever since i read 23, its so damn goood, I love the character Danni. great work man.

castielwinchester153@yahoo.com

This story is just so great i cannot stop reading it. I love the whole story and not just the sex parts.

Its a wonderful story in general and i hope the next chapter will come out soon.

After such a looooonnnnnng wait, this one was a let down. I was expecting some more teasing would ensue, but no, all of a sudden full blown sex in thrown in your face. This series is my 2nd favorite of all time, but this part is an anomaly. I hope the next part isn't the "wham bam thankyou mam" kind like this one cause there are thousands of others like that. I wish you had let the seduction carry on for 1 or 2 more parts. Please salvage it if you agree with my point!

Please for the love of Gawd don't make me wait another 10 months for the next chapter! THIS STORY IS THE BEST ON THIS WHOLE WEBSITE!!!

Bravo on your whole series of 'Just the Six of Us" It has great points in passion, comedy, and lets just face it, down and crazy sex. You've created a wonderful story with equally wonderful character. The twists and turns in the plots are unimaginable and I love how your going more dirty and controlling with Emma. I under stand the wait on the chapters, I know what its like to start something amazing and the get dragged into life or just get plain old writers block. If you ever need to bounce ideas or need anyone opinions on future chapters you can reach me at Lyon185@yahoo.com, I will try to reply in a timely manner

I really like the story. One thing though, I figured there would be more teasing after Mike got his memory back. Best story I've read on the site though.

As always this was a great story and it is always entertaining as well, Thanks for your time and effort and I hope there are many more chapters to come.

The has to be a celebratory family orgy to celebrate the return of mikes memory. Maybe a suprise for him once everyone knows

My comment covers ALL 24 of these wonderfully written chapters. I discovered the first one Friday and finished 24 this mourning! Yes I like to read! Waiting on 25, since it's in the works.

Still wondering now that Mike does have his memory back, what's next in store for them?

amc

I've read this story like a billion times (not really, like 3 or 4 times) but still,this is the best story I had ever read or heard of. Man... I fucking hope you continue this like forever!!!!!! I've checked this everyday but I never see chapter 25 come out. How come?? I really hope you keep writing and posting your, so erotic and wonderful, story!! If you don't... I will like peronally hunt you down and beat th fuck out of you. Your story is so realistic and I dream it was real everyday hoping r something like that to happen. Others may not agree with me but I consider you one of the best writers of erotic stories... Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THERE BETTER BE A CHAPTER 25 COMING OUT SOON OR IM GOING TO HUNT YOU DOWN. these stories are amazing

u have seriously gotta continue & finish this story.

i need more with danni , i love how she is just with him and no one else. he needs to get her pregnant

I hope that Chapter 25 shows up soon. You have developed a great though unusual set of characters and the interaction among them (besides the sex) is interesting.

your stories are amazingly hot and erotic. can't wait for chapter 25 and more.

C'mon man, finish Ch. 25.

I have read all the chapters and I got to say "hats off" to you Mentalcase, great work.

Have thoroughly enjoyed this. Looking forward to more. I can see possibilities for continuing and writing additional stories about other characters introduced in this one. Keep up the good work.

This series is one of the best I have ever read on Lit. The character's including the support cast are so well thought out and the internal banter with the Voice is just awesome. Can't. Wait for the next episode.

Dude i freaking love this story it is one of the best i have ever read honestly you have written this story so well im almost convinced you're a proffesional author. I hope you can release the next chapter soon, I can not wait for it to come out.

Chapter 25 needs to come out SOON, I can't wait to see what he does to Sarah and Beth!!!

The best series I have read on this site. The way you have sustained the story, develped the characters while maintaining very high quality in the sex scenes is remarkable. Keep up the good work!

This took me about three days to read, and damn its a good three days, and proud to say I will be looking for more chapters in the future. You are an excellent writer and I hope you keep writing in the future.

This series is amazing/ best ever! Keep going!!!!!!!

this is amazing, i read all of them in like two days. i just realized it stops for now at ch24, i might cry

You have just introduced anal after 24 chapters...THANK YOU...the past 2 chapters have been real tear jerkers and I hope this series never ends...literally I hope it hits chapter 100 hahahaha the story is amazing the way you have brought this family affair to life with the development of the characters and each with their own distinct personalities, the rise and fall of emotion, love and everything else just makes this story so good to read. I feel this story would make one hell of a movie or at least a 30 short film!

Again, this story is just beautifully written from start to I hope it never ends, I can't wait for the rest to unfold and where the family is going to head years from now in the story, which you can easily draw this story out over so many different paths...again I can't wait and thank you for the story so far!

I've never been so into a story on this site let alone elsewhere. It's extremely well written and engrossing. I've devoured all 24 chapters over the last couple days unable to think of much else than what will happen next. I've laughed, I've cried, I've been incredibly horny. I can't wait for the next installment and I'm looking forward to Mike's revenge on Beth and Sarah!

Another great chapter!! thank you..

GRRRRR!!!! COMEON ALREADY!!!

I just recently found your story and went from what I thought would be a simple jerk and go story to becoming really invested in these characters. So much so that I spent the last three days simply reading and catching up on all the chapters. You have a real talent for writing and I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work.

I just finished all 24 chapters in three days and I can't express to you how much I have enjoyed this story. I am beyond excited to see how this story continues to unfold, and can't wait for the twins to engage in anal. I can only imagine the time that goes into creating this story, but please continue to give us more....it seems as though there are plenty of us hanging on every word. Anxiously awaiting chapter 25. You have a gift!

This story is just sucking you in. I mean the plot is just mesmerizing and the twists and turns are just leaving you in awe. But for the moment I'm left in anticipation for the next chapters and to a climax or otherwise of the story.

just wanted to say that i am thoroughly impressed with your writing and i love this story. it has just the right mix of romance and sex. it is funny and touching and dirty and i even had to dry a tear or two when mike lost his memory and danni thought she'd lost him. i figure you might want to be finished with this story sooner rather than later, but i hope it goes long. i won't complain about the wait when the story is this worthwhile.

I have to be honest here in the fact that I don't care how long you take to write more chapters just please keep writing them. Your story has had me hooked from chapter 1 and has only gotten better. The mixture of humor, drama, and sex has at times left me shaken ( Mike's crash ) to unable to breathe because I'm laughing so hard ( Pussy coming in pairs, You are the man ). Thanks for writing this and while I know eventually it will have to come to an end I also hope its a long time from now. Again Keep up the great writing.

This story altogether (all the chapters) is my favorite story by far thank you

I love these stories, they are great! I know its been a long while since you posted a new chapter, and might not have 25 written, but I would absolutly love it if you kept this going, your a great writter and I love the way this story is going. I actually got teary eyed when mike got into his accident and everyone was talking about their parents. If you post a new chapter please email me; boredomfalls@comcast.net. even if you don't plan on posting more but have them written I would greatly appreciate it if you emailed the stories to me

Truly an amazing piece of literature. I wish you would right an additional 24 chapters and even then i am sure I would want the story to continue. I hope chapter 25 is not the last, but if it is, please be so kind as to include an epilogue so that we can know the outcomes of all out favorite characters.

Wow I love the story but why why why would u leave me with a cliff hanger

Now I really need to read more an find out if mike gets with Emily aswell

:);):)

The best ever on the edge of my seat dieing for more hope you can write the next one soon

I really enjoyed this ! Please write at least one more chapter! And maybe an epilogue? Lol, but you did a fantastic job on the story :)

hi i have absolutly love this series have you thought of like doing another series on the samee people but the all marry him in there hearts and then decide to have babies with them and then they decide to get all of their best female friends including emily to join the harem and become pregnant plz try it

I lived reading all your chapters but you said there may de more and I would like to know when that may be

Please answer soon,

Send me an email plz at j_duf77@hotmail.com

Amazing, as ever. If you need an expert editor, let me know. <3