by Bob Clark Jr.
Wow, what a great story! The depth of the characters is great, a cherry on top of the wonderful descriptive passages in the sex scenes. I can't wait to read the other two!
I have been looking for a story such as this for a long time. It is extremely interesting with a very good plot.
Here's hoping that there will be more like them in the future. Again, I really enjoyed it.
Omg that an awsome story,i seriously cant wait read other two.thanks for writing them.
Good story thru part 2 , but sorta sad . Yet it a fair representation of what the real world is about . Certainly not a bed of roses. So it a good realistic story. Sorta sad..
Wow, i love your writing style as awell as how real and...just great this story is. Wow, i'm just disappointed there isn't more than 4 parts to it. Damn shame.