All Comments on 'Justin Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I really really really like this story! Usualy in stories like these Justin comes off as a douchebag but I really like him and MacKenzie together. Hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it!!!!!

I love your stories!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. It's going to be interesting when/if Mac comes out and has to get a boyfriend to hide the fact that Justin is fucking him. I can't wait to see how jealous he'll be and how he'll explain why he's jealous. Please keep up the great work and please don't keep us waiting to long. ~ImpishKittyKat

HairyJacquesHairyJacquesover 8 years ago
Better and better

This story keeps getting better and better! At first I felt ambivalent about Justin. Mac allowed himself to be used, of course, but Justin seemed clearly to be a user. Now, however, they've moved from consensual exploitation (which I have to admit was hot) to synergy (which is even hotter). That they engage in their secret so openly is even hotter still. Justin's 12-incher even seems plausible now. There must be some guys out there--the true one percenters--with massive dicks. The fact that Mac can take what Justin delivers, combined with their long history together, helps this story to somehow seem real. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The Kinder Justin

Justin seems to have developed a kinder, gentler streak. He actually cares for Mackenzie, and I would;t be surprised to see the exchange of a kiss or two. Seems Mac could trace his hands over Justin's body (hairy chest or no?) in their lovemaking. Glad to see the better side of Justin, and not the rough insulting side.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
why

justin is not straight he is bi...and really a 12.75 inch dick and he takes it no issue all at once, little or no lube, all with hardly a sound ..everytime no point in a 1 in a couple hundred million sized dick...stick with above average 6-7

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This is so hot! Great fantasy!

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