by Callicious
Please hurry with the 3rd chapter..I'm so into this story and can't wait to see where it goes now..great story keep it up..
Great chapter again. I hope this will be a long series, I think it has the potential for it. Please do keep on writing this but I'd personally prefer if the chapters were a bit longer as it's easier to get in to the story.
1 10 page story is 10 times better than 10 1 page stories :) Still, 5 stars again.
The story is advancing just fine, thank you! (Contrary to a below poster who seems to be in a rush) I love the slow character build up with enough substance to get me hard or 'rub one out', (never heard that expression before this site, wonder what country it was native to?) I'm in no rush for anyone to get laid, believe it or not! Its not very often on here we get a GooD multi chapter story that keeps our interest without constant repetitive sex. Thanks for fun content!!
You really do know how to " tease " with a story line, and " rub one out " originated in England, long ago.
Really loving this story - I've read it before, but long enough ago that a lot of it's fresh again.
It's rather obvious that Justin's inexperienced, though. Instead of struggling to keep his boxers on he should have been removing Susie's teeshirt - Why Susie's? Because she was the one most likely to let him succeed, or at least get a flash of boobs or puss, and maybe a feel of he naked bum, and the sexual dynamics were such that both she and Justin were naked Rosemary wouldn't have been far behind and even Steph would probably have been topless. Steph would probably have still called a stop "before we do something we would be sorry about later", but would have been motivated to give Justin a private showing in the near future.
I agree with anonymous that "The story is advancing just fine, thank you! (Contrary to a below poster who seems to be in a rush)". A good buildup and suspense is way more erotic than just a "fuck description".