All Comments on 'Justin Thyme Ch. 12'

I need like 6 more pages in this chapter.

Your writing just keeps getting better. Right now it is this series I look for each time I'm on LitE. Thank you for the great reading! I can't wait to see what is behind door number...I lost count. Oh nice use of the word yenta.

I have held back rating and commenting on your long but excellent story. I am grateful for your hard work and dedication on such a long story and appreciate it immensely. I will keep looking for new chapters daily even though I know you can't write as fast as we (your readers) can read them . Please accept my praise of your work as my appreciation and hope you continue to write in good health. Thank you again.

I truly enjoy your writing. I like the way you show that there is more to the story then just sex between brother and sister. At first I thought it was going to be another one of those story that is all about sex and nothing else. But as I read the story I came to enjoy the way it has turned out. It's a wonderful story and the way you have written it shows that you have a talent for writing. Also you take the time to post each chapter with the right amount of pages and leave off wanting to know what happens next. Other writers usually write a page or two when writing a story. Looking forward to the next chapter and to find out whats behind that Iron Door!! As c52fultion said I want to say I appreciate your work and thank you also.

OH SNAP!!! you do know how to leave a person hangin, just like the ledger being interrupted. lol fantastic as usual again , ty/ bill

You outdid yourself yet again!!! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. You are an excellent writer with a very good imagination. Looking forward to prom, and Mary and the doctor (maybe) and all the other characters coming together as well. This is an AWESOME story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another home run! Really, just really great chapter! Thank you once again for this story.

I know that it sounds like I am blowing sunshine up your skirt, but I have to tell you the the only reason I gave you 5 stars is because it doesn't go to fifty.

I have enjoyed the entire series tremendously and eagerly await the next installment.

Your writing is superb and character development is on point.

Talk about cliff-hangers......

Dan

You could have made this a book and it would have been a best seller... Can't wait for the next chapter!!

By far some of the best writing on this site. The whole thing reads like a book with some good sex thrown in. Just fantastic. 5 stars and then some. Can't wait for the next chapter.

REALLY Like the story so far. I'm glad you're taking time to flesh out the characters etc., and I like the storyline you're developing. That being said, more sex would be good, too. Especially since your sex scenes aren't illogical, as so many "quick wank" story's seem to be. And thanks for that cliffhanger... I'll be waiting with bated breath.

Great story, just the right blend of plot and sex, but WOW what a cliff hanger. Can't wait to hear about what's behind the door and the gold mine, hope it's soon.

I gotta tell you, I have been skipping the sex scenes just to find out what is happening with Samuel Johnson and even Mary & Tom. So wow! Just don't take this as a suggestion to drop the sex, it is not, but the story plot is great

Incest and intrigue. Great combination. Gotta love it.

Another great chapter. Can hardly wait for the next one. I love how this are go with every one in the story. I like these types of stories that are not just the old Wam bam stories.

Loyal reader

Killer12.

This story gets interesting as the chapters develop, please continue.

This story would be a national best seller in fiction if published as a novel, if it wasn't for the incest. For that I am grateful, so I can read this great story for free on Literotica.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Fabulous writing. Keep it up please.

love this story, I wish I did not find it for about 6 more months, so I could read the chapters without interruption. Thanks.

You got me hooked and I need another fix, you just leave me hanging the way you end your stories.

Don't keep me waiting for ch 13

Another great chapter! I'd like to read the next chapter tomorrow, but love the time, effort and thought that goes into each installment. Eagerly awaiting 13! .....And Thank You!

I smile each time i see a new chapter posted. This story is absolutely great !

Don't even care about the sex aspect of this, I just need the story to keep going. Every time I get to the end of a chapter I sigh, resigned in the thought I have to wait at least 10 more days for the next...

I want to re-iterate what everyone else is saying about this story... I want more! looking forward to the next release

The only reason I can't give you more than 5 stars is simple - unlike the tale you telling.

Sir, you have us sitting on the edge of our seats, at the end of each chapter, wanting more! I love this story and like all the others, can't wait for the next.....

Thank you for sharing!

RecHiker

I need at least another few chapters to keep me going, finished 12 and now waiting for more, truly good writing and a very engaging romp, well done.

Best story I've read in a long time. Thank You for your hard work!!!! Caused me to cuss when I got to the end of chapter 12 and realized I didn't have a chapter 13 to continue reading!

moremoremore

My only disappointment is when I reach the end of a chapter.

It is a fantastic story and enjoyed by all who read it. Please don't stop anytime soon.

Thanks for the effort you have put into developing and continuing this story.

I've been following this saga since its beginning and have come to enjoy it more with each episode.

The depth of characters, the myriad of subplots and the detail associated with each make it an interesting read at the very least.

It is easily one of if not the best story I've read on this site. I am impressed with the imagination, depth of knowledge and writing skills of the author.

Ignore the naysayers who think this would not be salable as a novel either in print or in electronic form. I know one former Literotica author who made the transition to successful author of erotic fiction (search for *eve* among Literotica authors). She has a number of stories still posted and is IMNSHO an excellent author herself.

I've read all of your stories and must say that this one is by far my favorite. I registered onto the site just so I could keep up to date of your stories. Keep up the great work!

you. But you are mean.... as the door opens............eheheh

I really enjoy reading this story and can't wait for the next episode. Write faster. There is one thing I would like you to do, soon, if you are aren't keeping for more dramatic reasons. It's about time for Justin to get rid of the camera in the Koala, please. I would hate for its discovery to destroy the relationship with Rosemary and Stephanie.

Please write as fast as possible.

This is my first comment. All I can say is Write Fast. lol

nice story don't worry about the small errors keep it fun for you to write

i have been reading stories on this site for years and this is the best story i have read to date keep this story going , and i cant wait for next chapter - cheers

Keep this going it is getting more interesting!

Love this story, it has a very good plot to it and it's not just about sex. You feel as though you know each of the characters. Keep writing.

I need more now.... ;) Best serie of stories in here..

Oh you fu@#er you can't stop now

Love the story read 1-7 now just finished 8-12 and the changes keep coming.

first the accident followed by the intro of Michael. then the House being bought.

and now Stephanie and Rosemary have their own secret entrance to Justin's room.

Not to mention what's behind Door #3

If you stop, I will kill you. Jk but please write more

Actually, $350,000 is a reasonable amount for the reward. The original reward offered was 10% of the amount lost. It seems that a 10% finders fee is still in order.

The merger took place in modern times, and buckets of gold would nt have been involved

If you look at railroad history you will find that these two rail lines merged twice,after the first time they were broke up under the monopoly and anti-trust laws in the early 20th century.

Callicious~ You might want to consider fleshing this out a bit, and publishing it for real. Your eroticism is excellent but needs to be cleaned up a bit, favoring flavored vernacular over the more crass and common descriptive phrases.

And don't let the hounds bugger you about the Grammar, though Spell Check could make for easier reading. Ordinary people speaking are rarely grammatically correct.

Good luck.

Intelligencelover - To respond to your comment, Callicous died in 2014. He was an excellent story teller, and I still enjoy re-reading his work.

RIP Callicious

You will be missed

I would have said turn the basement area where the skeletons were found into a private game room/recreation hall/family room/site security office expressly for Justin, Michael, Susie, Stephanie, and Rosemary, bring a couch down through the carriage house, assemble a pool table, dart board, and have Justin wire it up for modern day electricity and television. Michael could handle building security while Rosemary and Justin were in class, alleviating potential problems with ex-boyfriend, ex-girlfriends, stalkers, drunk trespassers, drug overdoses, vehicle vandalism, fires, and broken pipes.