All Comments on 'Justine Ch. 08'

This is heading for a great finish Kal, keep it up!!!

Thank you!

M1

are really strong in this chapter. Besides the fact that Quinn is showing himself to be a strong human, Justine see's him as not just a warrior but also a sire. There is still so much about Quinn we don't know....but watching him grow along side Justine is perfect. And Mikhail has shown himself to be loyal to the Queen(s) despite the fact that he is a mercenary. He has to be a good guy if Zoe and he are mates because she is to serve Queen Justine. And as for Jeremiah it's nice to know his days are numbered regardless of what happens. It will be nice to see it happen though. hehe-he

love it love and i cant wait to read the next chapter

Loved this chapter especially the cliffhanger at the end, keep up the excellent work.

Donna

an excellent chapter. Your stories are my own personal crack. :oD I get straight giddy every time I see an update! Such a great writer!

every time i think you can not get any better you go and write a better chapter i can not wait to read the next chapter

Damn girl with all these cliff hanger this needs to be a movie! I am literally eating popcorn yelling at my computer. Please hurry with the update..........

Cliffhanger of death!!! Excellent update. You know it got 5 stars from me. Just sayin'... Please update soon & I'm anxiously awaiting the newest series. Would love a sequel from Wolves...

:D QMS

That's for the damage to my nails and cuticles whilst reading your stories and the ensuing cliff hangers!! I want my money. And an update.

so zoe and mikhail are mates it sucks that they had to meet that way; justine is the only person who can take the arrow out of king edwards chest without killing him i wonder what else her powers may entail; and how exactly is she suppose to get inside amandas house without being invited inside; cant wait to read the next chapter

you keep doing this to me! you write a story that i just can't stay away from! i'm so glad that that's the way it is too. keep up the good work, i'll be here reading them when you do!

Got a new longer update...Zoe and Mikhail are mates and Jeremiah is going to get all he's been asking for!!! Tap that azz Justine and Quinn make him wish that he had just walked away!! Thanks for this great story Kala!

Anjel54

My girl-

This piece is extremely righteous!!!!! It is smooth as silk.....so fucking killer with the suspense and interweaving of Vamp history and royal hierarchy...the process...etc.

You have turned this mother out and I'm so loving it. You consistently deliver a dynamite work which leaves your fans drooling for more.

Loving the evolution of Justine and Quinn into their respective roles.......absolutely silky and flawless.

So looking forward to the next installment because there is some serious ass kickin' on the menu!!!! Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!

Lady I have to say you rock so hard, I loved this update, I think Jeremiah should be more afraid of the human Quinn than Violet, Mikhail or even Justine.

The suspense is killing me!

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH chewing nails, pacing the room, peering at the updates waiting waiting OMG waiting. LOL I love it

manning up. I still don't care for him at all, but I really like Justine. Hopefully Quinn will become worthy of her. And if someone else has to have Mikhail, I'm glad it's Zoe. They're strong enough for each other. Can't wait to read their story.

Thanks for writing!

I'm loving this story!

Mmh, slowly the reasons why Justine won't get in contact with the queen and her people gets a bit too constructed, artificial and annoying.

Also, the vampire protagonists don't behave "vampiry" enough, but more like ordinary people who happen to drink blood and have a few super powers.

The plot is getting very intense and we're only 1/3 of the way through it. The characters are so well done, too.