All Comments on 'Kane & Spencer'

by amyredek

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famusamusfamusamusalmost 12 years ago

I didn't like this chapter. If Kane was fooling around with his ex-lover he was cheating on Tracey and the day before their wedding too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm sure it was nice but...

...Sorta took offense at being called "kaffir". There was absolutely no need for such a racist comment. Could not continue reading after that.

Dharmie.

brijeonbrijeonalmost 10 years ago
Had loved it until

I enjoyed the first story but this one was so far left from the original. I truly hated that that Kane was a dog, I loved the relationship he had with Tracey. Maybe you wanted another long story but you totally destroyed it. You took us into a love story against the odds with a thriller and I cared about both MC but you had Tracey ok sex between Kane and another man, Tracey raped, Kane seeing this, his attitude was suck it up and get over it and by the way I'm going to the library to have my dick sucked by another man,takes Tracey home has sex bareback just to prove he still wanted him sexually WTF and o it took Tracey 3days to get over the raped with Kane fucking him for the three days straight again WTF. Enters another man who Kane screws including seconds from his wedding again WTF I wanted Tracey to walk in but you kept that from happening, I skipped a lot of it because I didn't care anymore. You were happy with Tracey being the meek woman in the corner, with no voice whereas in the beginning he was the power behind them you took that all away and I did not want him to Marry Kane I felt he was too got for him. DISAPPOINTED

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
nicely done

great works. This and the prequel. I don't normally care for reading long stories online. I'd prefer them on paper. But this kept me captivated. Only 2 things. I didn't like Marcus having sexual acts with others after tracey had mentioned only with her permission. And it would have been good to have Marcus get his memory back. That way Its assured the relationship could last after he remembered his life. I must admit, i almost expected tracey to have some big secret. She had a few interesting talents.

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