All Comments on 'Karen's Slavery Ch. 03'

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Cindy1001Cindy1001almost 9 years ago
Enjoyed it very much

Karen and her co-slaves have such a lovely sequence of the day. You narrate it well. I am becoming an addict. Looking out for the party.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well Done

Written as if the writer had been a part of the story. Interesting. Hope the author divulges more of her own personal experience. Waiting for the following chapters.

Mmmarie260Mmmarie260almost 9 years ago

Please please please can we have the next part!?!?!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

"she supposed that, in time, she would get used to it; she had to since she had no choice."

Still good stuff. I loved the threat of incestual rape. She still has a choice, though, since the collars are executioner collars. I'm uncertain as to why she hasn't taken that choice. I can't see any positive future for her, so why should she bother? I'll never understand that.

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