by Dai Raku
The context of the story was good ,HOWEVER, I always thought it was"holy" shit not holly shit.. and the wanna be ghetto slang was a little annoying as well
You racist losers who write/like that kind of crap should get a life and stop polluting the internet with your garbage.
you try too hard though.
the woman 'patricia' sounded alot like a ho..
plus like the other person said, the wanna be ghetto slang was annoying
'brotha'
ye.. uh. that's it. i was ok. nothin special.