by chargergirl
But I loved picturing them riding off into the sunset.
This was an awesome series. Please start a new story.
Kate and Connor have endured so much, as siblings and as lovers. It's good to see them move on to a (hopefully) happier chapter in their lives. Though I suspect their life together in Maine would not be without challenges.
Chargergirl, you did a wonderful job of covering a wide range of emotions. Can't wait to read more, whether it's another chapter of Kate and Connor or an entirely different piece.
Excellent story, well written, great characters - can't wait for more!
Excellant stories. Please hurry the sequals out (hopefully there will be some). Do I sense some mopar lust?
I have read all your stories and they are terrific! I have you in my favs so hurry up on chapter 2 of the other story.
This is one of the series which is just none of them to just get off or something. This was romantic, emotional and absolutely awesome!!!! Loved it a lot!!! I could even feel the rage in Connor as the description was great and thats just how I behave, when I'm just about to loose my senses in anger (Had that situation quite some times). All I want to say is, that this story was great and I'd love to read another chapter. Thanks for sharing such a great story with us.
I am blown away by all your stories. You are the best author I have ever read period Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
I read but don't normlly comment. This was an excellent story. Well written and very good story line. I am a sucker for a love story and have no hangups about brother-sister love.
on this or any site. I have to tell you that I put you on par with my most favorite authors, Jessy19 and D.K. Moon. You write a beautiful sibling love story and an always intriguing series of sub-plots. Thanks for all of your stories. Please keep writing for us.
Normally when you read erotica, you either have too much sex and to little story, or too much story and not enough sex. i think that this was perfectly portioned in every way. Please, write more! Being an author myself, as well as being a reader of many books, I have to say that this was one of the better written stories I have read in my days.
Like your every story, this is also an amazing outcome of your writing skill. Amazing. I loved it!
i absolutely loved your story! It was so emotional and just perfect! Good job, can't wait to read more of your stories.
dats a fuckin great story, u better make another chapter for wen they get to maine or something! I love how it waz like a mystery and love in one! MAKE ANOTHER ONE PLZZZ!!!!!
It's the second time I read it and its still beautiful. PLEASE write one more chapter. So we know how things turn out in ME for them.
typical chargergirl story no endding and the uncle was never punished why can't these wannabe writers ever finish a story
DBRS
Lovely story, though I was deeply repulsed by Kate's uncle for perving on her for god-knows how long.
I just discovered your work and want to say I am wrapt by your stories.
How nice to read I/T stories with a bare minimum of gutter talk, malformed overgrown mammaries, deformed dicks while submerged in the sweet love that sometimes comes to fortunate siblings.
All I can say is wow!!! I thought that was beautifully done. So far all your stories are of love and trust. Heartbreak and healing. I am getting ready to read the last one. Please come back and write some more chargergirl. I love your stories.
this sounds so real ! and there love for each other was never ending. and this is only the beginning of there love together imagine how unbreakable it will be as life goes on, a love to no end
Great writing. Just beautifully plotted & written. Wonder why I don't see the stars for me to give the 5 stars. Oh well, better still then, here's 10 stars for you & a two thumbs up! More please!!!
Thanks everyone! Love your feedback. I turned off the star rating quite some time ago because ratings don't mean much to me. What matters is what you all think and I love hearing from you! ~Chargergirl xo
This is about the fifth time i've read though this story love it more each time. I would love to hear what happens to them in maine. That edwin and bet got what they deserve.
We both love your stories.My sister and I have been together for 40 years.I had been in love with her for as long as I could remember but only found out how she felt when I was 18 and she 19.We were always very close as your stories characters are.We would always cuddle up in front of the TV even when our parents made comments about it being inappropriate.She used to come into my room at night and often mom or dad would find us in the morning but we were always clothed and nothing sexual ever took place.We always told them we were just close and as I'd never had a girlfriend mom and dad thought I was gay although when they asked me I said I was not.One evening my sis came out and asked why I never had a girlfriend.I told her I was in love with a women she knew.The next few days she was trying to find out which of her friends it was but I would not say.She was constantly crying and every time I tried to comfort her it made her worse.Mom said she was having girl trouble and to leave her be.One evening she asked if it was her.I said yes and that I did not want anything to change as I did not want to lose her.She told me she had been in love with me since she was about 16 and mom had guessed how she felt and had had a long talk to her at that time.We thought they would be OK with it so we told them that night we wanted to spend our lives together as 'husband and wife'.Dad went into orbit and all hell broke out.They did not throw us out but he threatened me with the police but mom claimed him down.He never accepted us as a couple until we had two daughters and he loved his grand kids.Mom was always ok ish but was upset that one of us would get hurt or in trouble.We went to a lawyer and he told us to keep quiet about the relationship as it was illegal but that adult brother and sister incest cases were rarely prosecuted in UK unless one had an undue influence over the other.As in your stories family were appalled but funnily enough we had a close friend couple that were always very supportive just as in your story.Your stories are very close to our experiences but we had less drama.Please write some more we really think you are talented and sis says your better author than Erica James and her shades of grey books.More please PLEASE best on internet
I can't believe there is no way to say how good this was
I read all of them and thoroughly enjoyed your hot sexy & loving tales. I hope you write some more like these soon.
... but I do have one, and only one, complaint ..., why can we not vote on it?
15 Stars would be the best way I could put it.
And the first chapter is in my Favorites, so I can come back to it in the future.
Thank you for these.
"Kate And Connor Ch. 03:" - Most every accolade and praise imaginable I've given in all my comments for each separate chapter. All I'll say now is that every comment I've made can be emphasized at least times ten (10). You are welcome to continue with your great writing skills; you'll get no arguments from any reader's comments here on Literotica.
Well another great brother and sister love story that the end was ok but since it has been years since it was written it will be up to the readers imagination to finish this tale.
Very nice. I wish that I could give it the excellent rating that it deserves.
I feel like this story is somewhat unfinished, but it's been over a decade so like Rancher46 said, it's up to us as the readers to imagine how it all ended