All Comments on 'Katie and Daddy Ch. 01'

Deliciously Hot! More please.

I've submitted part two of this story and it's awaiting approval. There's also a (much longer) part three in the works that's almost finished. I'm not sure if I'll continue this storyline after that. It depends on the feedback I get.

These were originally written for a woman that I was involved with for a time. She was very much into Daddy/daughter roleplay. The main character, Katie, is modeled after her.

As to punctuation... yes, it's a bit wonky in the quotations. That's fixed in the next submissions.

Please more. She's so naughty. I hope he spanks her!

... thank God for Anonymous! Where would we be without her? Heavens,

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could destroy the fabric of space/time! Thank you, oh Anonymous!!

(Oh, by the way: nice short story!)

An amazing story, Love is the answer

Your writing is so erotic and sensual. I love reading it. and I love you, Daddy!

This is my fantasy. Plus this story the perfect length!!! Can't wait to read more.

Story was so hot I hope I can have this sort of pleasure with my own daughter

Fuuuuuucckkkk yeeeeessss that made me cum