All Comments on 'Katy's Smell: Day 06'

I wish there was an easy way to save the entire story in a file to reread later. It has been an emotional struggle to have to wait for each enstallment to post. Almost like waiting for Christmas morning as a kid !

After the last chapter is posted I'll be compiling it all into a single story.

I never had a sister. When reading these incest stories I feel like I have missed out on something wonderful. Others have any experiences?

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I got a feeling the girls are playing him.

Adrienne has no hope. Something like that would destroy a marriage (yes, I know it's make-believe-world).

lol how hard is it these days to copy paste all parts into one neatly compiled Word file? Hell I copy-pasted it on my iPad using Google Docs and edited on my computer later. Long live technology!

This was a fairly hot, good story but I been reading a few stories that are incomplete so I wish there was some way to request a notification when a new part is posted to a story string or by an author. It would save a lot of checking incomplete stories (some that will, unfortunately, never be completed). Or, does this already exist am I not aware of it?

When is Day 7 coming????

Well written and extremely erotic. I have a feeling that Adrienne knows far more than she's letting on, I wouldn't be surprised if she'd been outside the office door listening to her husband fucking his own sister, and was surprised at how horny she got while listening. It's Adrienne who is manipulating the siblings not the other way round. She's the real pervert.

I guess we'll have to wait for chapter 7 to find out if I am right .... Or maybe I'll just Write it myself ...... Hahahaha

Five deserved stars

Like now

Must have more. Day 7 please.

Waiting for the last part is really hard !

This is one hot story, but you can't leave it without that final part.

Please, please, please, post the next part soon

This is very well written and thought out.Pure fantasy but still very good.

I've been with my sister as my wife for 35 years but when we were young we were inseparable and always slept together,neither had boy or girlfriends but nor did we do anything sexual except kissing.That changed when she was 19 and I 18.We told our parents before anything happened and that did not go well.We had to move away.We have never been apart,never argued badly or even looked at anyone else.No one knows about our true relationship and no one has ever guessed people are too busy with their own lives to care unless they are told and then get all Self richous.We have two perfectly healthy grown up daughters who know but it's never bothered them.

This is unfair to keep us awaiting the last chapter. I can only hold my breath so long!

Like many of your other stories you end it short and never seem to finish it. Its been well over a year and you have not continued this series. I was going to keep tabs on your profile in case you released to last chapter, but with the amount of time that's gone by I won't be holding my breath.

...but in the end i get it as dissapointment. The emotional plot is cut short right at the 1st chapter and the intrigue is too shallow. Specially since we get to see both sides so there is absolutely no mystery here. The pain the sister radiated at start is nowwhere looked into harder and whole story concentrates sadly around the sex. Apart from 1st chapter i would say that the incest part doesnt rly matter and it could be random married couple with random young girl having a fling with the guy.

The wife being into incest strongly undercut any kind of dramatic tension, but it's still a shame that the story was left unfinished at such an important point.

I have really enjoyed this story. I found it to be very sexy indeed. I hope you will write the last chapter so we are not left hanging by the....

You got to come back and finish this, such a good story. I wish some of the chapters were a little bit longer but thats just me being a greedy for more good stuff.

... that the rest of this is still coming. Because it needs to be concluded. A story this good deserves no less.

And it is a great story!

The scent of a woman can be an intoxicating thing, and for me there is one woman in particular that has been on my mind every chapter, so I have a good understanding of the story line. And it is why I so hope you finish it.

I gave 5 Stars across the board, each chapter.

But finish it please. 5*

The story's over as it is. I mean, what's next? A threesome? We know that won't just suddenly spring up in 2/3 pages. So relatively this story had its closure. I only wish that Cphucker would come back and repost his earlier deleted stories.

I read all six chapters only to find the concluding chapter was never posted.

Thanks for leaving your readers hanging.

Please finish it, though given the passage of time, I don’t think u will

A shame.

5/5

One of my favorites!

Is that last chapter coming out?

One of the best stories, I gave this a 5. I wonder why you haven’t added the next chapter as promised, it’s been 6 years

Absolutely awesome! I don’t want this story to end! Please say it doesn’t. 1 more chapter...

I dunno how they haven’t been found out in the house yet.

WAUW !

Well I guess I will just have to imagine the last chapter, but it won’t do any justice to your elegant and emotional writing.

WTF?!

Where’s the last chapter? It’s not like you stopped writing…

7 years already, and still waiting for last? chapter ... are you in for writing it?

Final chapter!!

Seriously ? No ending ?

Ok you just posted a new story …. I know your still around …. Please finish this one 🙏

Ok I know you’re still on here …. You just posted a new story…. Please finish this one 🙏

It takes me a long time to write, so I understand delays...But please, finish this story... It truly deserves an ending.

Wow are people still reading these? I guess I better finish it then :)

As per the last couple of comments please do complete this story. It's really good and needs it's finale!

Diddo! What everyone else is saying. Please finish this story!

I re read it after seeing your name on your new posted story. I love the smell of pussy and mostly love pussy smelling incest stories. I just love this particular incest kind of story where the wife encourages the husband to engaged in incest but had no idea that incest already occurred. This is kinda unique. Its so excitingly thrilling.

It could be you suddenly could not find an exciting scenario to continue this story? You seem to have lots of fans who really are excited for you to continue this story. Please do. I gave you 5 stars for reading this story again.

While waiting for the new installment of Onakura I saw that this series was published more than six years ago so I jumped strait into it, not expecting it to end without resolution. Now, especially with the delay since the last Onakura chapter, I'm hoping it won't suffer the same fate.

I really wanted to give this one five stars but if this is where the story ends I can't do so.

It's a good read otherwise and I was well enjoying it while reading it.

It's a shame you never finished this story. While I think you dragged it out too long, the situation was hot. Seriously think that the husband needs to come clean with his wife. She's already told him she's ok with it already happening, but she could rightly feel betrayed if she finds out.

Also, how can they be college sweethearts if they got married at 20&18? For more realism, they should have been 2-3 years older.

Where is/are the finale to this series...????!!!! Even YOU commented that you should get around to completing it, yet, here we are, waiting and waiting...

Well, not so much me waiting, I just found the story, but I went to read more, and find...THERE IS NO MORE!!!!!

So, please, finish the series...even better, extend the series to a future of them together. And, keep Mom in the mix; do not allow her to be alone and miserable. She deserves better!!

Another Five**5**Star chapter!!🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌

Really sad that this isn't finished after following on for so long