All Comments on 'Kay Returns'

A story that is so very, very good and just to my liking. The way that you develop the trust and respect between the Dom and his Sub, can be seen throughout this excellently written story. The generosity shown by Nick (Pete???) towards Ida and her daughters shows him to be a man of character and bodes well for his and Kay's future together. Their new relationship is sound and I am sure that they lived happily ever after. A well thought out tale written by a true master at his craft! Pete.

Leaving somebody tied, helpless and without supervision is the act of a criminal idiot. Not the way to do it at all!!!

Amazing story...Loved it....Have never read one of your stories before but have instantly become a fan.

Wonderful story!

Boyd

thank you. I have very few of your stories I haven't liked. you did it again.

Great story line but it got confusing when his name changed from Nick to Pete. Hopefully you will write more with these two characters.

I have to say, definitely on the fantasy side, but then again, why not? It's fiction, and that's the nice thing about writing a story - you can make things come out the way you wish they would in real life. In reality, we don't know too much about why the relationship failed in the first place. That a woman would have to be reduced to being so completely in debt and apparently feeling she has no prospects for finding another job so she returns to her ex, would usually not bode well.<br><br>

Other than leaving her restrained so long she almost wets herself, the husband (Nick aka Pete) obviously wants her not only back with him, but happy to be there. With the ease in which the ex-wife then happily submits to being a live-in housekeeper, cook and lover, it would appear she feels the trade-off is worth it now, whereas before she did not. <br><br>

Although not explicity stated, it could seem that the ex-husband, when asking her to talk about all her lovers since the divorce, and what she liked and disliked about each of them, was trying to glean understanding of why their marriage didn't succeed in the first place. In so far as this story goes, it works as he seems intent on providing her the things she likes sexually, while imposing his ownership in subtle ways. Aaah, if only relationships (and finances such as his!) were so easy. But I'm a sucker for happy endings, such as the one this story had.

While it didnt have much sex, it had wonderful character developement and a very touching storyline. Would you please follow up with further developments on this story. I think it would be wonderful.

I couldn't stop reading it...I would love to read a continuation of this story line.

I liked the concept of BDSM being used in an unusual way. It is different and it has some interesting aspects to it. I hope this story continues as I am interested to see where the author takes these characters.

Scorpio, Scorpio, Scorpio...

You've done it yet again.. another great story! This was most definitely BDSM with a twist; and a bit of "Touched By Two Angels" as well.<br>

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The anonymous person who wrote this comment, <i>"It's fuckin' stupid, childish, UN-erotic, non-funny, and total gibberish nonsense! The first half page was more like a silly boy of, say 9, writing about some odd meaningless fantasies.... Fiction, no matter what genre, is supposed engender some small degree of believability or, at least, mindless fun, no? No fuckin' way any one is gonna talk like this in an office! The writing was good enough, as usual... But, my god, what total gibberish nonsensical fantasies are these "BDSM"?"</i> apparently does NOT understand the lessons Pete was teaching Kay while training her at the same time... nor does he understand BDSM or the different ways that bonds can be formed between Master/slave Dom/sub. Kay's lucky that Pete cared enough to take her back in the first place.<br>

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And since when is it a bad thing to do something nice for a complete stranger? Pete didn't want to just let anyone rent the beautiful house; and it wouldn't have been effective for either he or Kay to discuss living in the house.<br>

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So, why not let a single mother with two lovely teen-age daughters rent it? The girls showed that they would keep it clean... and Ida showed Pete and Kay that the house would be cared for with love and respect. Ironically, these were two lessons that Pete was teaching Kay at the same time.<br>

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I'm glad he gave Kay a second chance, and that Kay was wise enough to quickly realize that she had screwed up by not taking Pete up on his original offer all those years ago. I think that any woman who was lucky enough to have Pete as Master would benefit and the lessons would be learned well enough the first time to allow Kay to have time to learn new lessons.<br>

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The only thing that you didn't do was to fulfill the intonated promise of new surprises at the house that Kay would be bound to enjoy. I hope you do more with Pete/Kay and Ida and her daughters.

Excellent dialog and character development - interesting plot line - another winner from Scorpio44!

Some may find that a wimp statement from a guy - well screw you!!

Scorpio - we have communicated before I really enjoy a lot of your work this one is a gut wrencher and I am not a big fan or Dom/Sub stories as a rule but I see this one very differently -

A person would have to be very well of to be capable of pulling this one off as described but there is nothing unrealistic about that - so the potential to be real in this one stays very high -

Nice work thanks a lot,

on of the most enterataining storys ive read

Working my way through all your older work. I'd read leaving the navy but most everything else was new to me and this is perhaps my favorite so far. Thanks for sharing with us all.

I started with Scorpio44 and read every story but the BDSM ones. After finishing the Scorpio44A set I then hungered for more so I started on the unread BDSM stories and I was pleased that I enjoyed the positive way you handled this genre and I now have a few more Scorpio44 stories to read (rubbing hands gleefully).

Thanks for many many hours of emotionally satisfying reading - have bookmarked the Scorpio index and will be checking often for new stories.

I really enjoyed reading this story. I felled in loved with the characters. can't get enough of this story. Please continue this story!!!!!

thank you for writing such an inspiring story... the emotion had my spirits lifted...

* * * * * * * If others deserved five stars

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 this one deserved SEVEN

It pushed all the right buttons and made the time it took to read it very well worth it.

Thanks again, again, Lynn

I really enjoyed this, so so very much!!

However.. I did get a little bit confused through out it. I had to flip to the beginning when she began calling him "Pete",

Apart from all the different names for the Master, super well done!! <3 thank you for writing this, I really did enjoy it more than I probably deserved to.

Finally someone wrote a bdsm story that didn’t include sharing their partner with another man! Bravo.

Good story with interesting pints.just a shame it wasn't longer.

Good story but something is missing. I think it's going too fast. Kay understanding after a day got example.

I want to hear more about their marriage. There are hints about the end of their marriage but nothing else. What happened? How did he come to offer her the slave contract the first time?

I'm missing some info about his financial state. He gave a very expensive gift to the waitress. How can he afford it? On the other hand he did not succeed much with the previous tenant, did he? Or did the presence of Kay made all the difference?

We don't hear much about what he thinks? Why does he want to take her as a slave? How does he know about d/s? Why does he think it will solve Kay's problems? he must have experienced it before as he knows about the process. Maybe it:s related to my previous question about the end of their marriage?

Did he really wait for Kay for 3 years? Did he prepare himself to the day she will come back (or not)? But her photo is still on his desk, so he must have still loved her.

This story is both unrealistic and formulaic. Is it necessary to always introduce additional females into the story?

She was married to him before. She refused being submissive. (There are other types than 'slavery). The sex is completely different than the first marriage??? I can't imagine that. His attitude and preferences can NOT have changed that much.

You appreciate cunnilingus as a component to great sex. Recognizing that coitus is only part of it. Most Americans haven't a clue. (Most = over 60%). 90%+ of lit hetro writers are blind to this.

You are a great writer, but can you write stories about men who don't have unlimited resources (friends and money)?

It's wonderful to have a friendly cop who can be called to witness an elicit love nest. Not to mention, a 100,000 under the couch cushions.

Live in the joy of giving. That is the meaning. No matter how you get there.