All Comments on 'Keep Watching'

I am age 19 Korean girl in Canada and remember my first times with family member. I read your story and think of what they did to me and wish to have happen again. I can tell u what happened and maybe u write a new story of family and girl like me. kellypam18@aol.com. byebye

I thought this story was well written and had a nice storyline behind it. Nice work!

I usually only scan the story sections and read the top rated stories but I'm glad I chose to read this one even though it wasn't rated as "hot"!

The details you use really turned me on. And the biggest turn on of all was how realistic and believable it all was.

Thank you! Keep up the good work. This story is now listed under my favorites. :)

I need this to happen to me. Anybody wanna hook up for some role play? ;D

Extraordinarily well written - what a fabulous story.

While some of this story is over the top, the main plot is lusty, sexy, and heavy. Lust with love. Love with lust. The story gripped me from the first to the last sentence. This was the first story of this saga that I read. I will now have to retrace and read the rest. Also brought back memories of my gf using her strapon on me. God could she light up my butt with her fingers and "cock". Loved her deeply until cancer took her. Will be reading this again and again.

It was written so wonderfully well. It seemed realistic and I loved every second of it. Great job

Why ? Cuz having been involved in some kinky sex others would say was unrealistic, I know the human mind especially when it comes to kinky sex.

Melanie is freak. I have a pussy for her to suck and eat

I faved this long ago and just now reread it. It’s incredibly hot and I really enjoyed it.

Please fuck me daddy