All Comments on 'Keeping up with the Joneses Ch. 02'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

Mrs Bragg was a beautiful addition

qm2x1798qm2x1798over 6 years ago
Waiting for More

Great story....hoping there will be more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love the humor and wordplay

Good writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please Don’t Make Us Wait a Whole Year

You are absolutely talented and this series is the hottest ever be ever read! I need more! I’d love to see Alex’s mom and Mrs. Bragg continue his education. Can’t wait for Catherine, either!

kingswedekingswedeover 6 years ago
More of this story soon.

Get his sisters involved with the brother, and then have the two wives play with each other as he pleasure both of them with licking and sucking before fucking all four gals around the pool.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 6 years ago
Ahhh Y E S !!

Did they get the Cherry Tree planted? That "was"? what they started out to do, wasn't it? Before they got so "distracted"....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story but need more like Alex with Mom and Cat.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
AWESOME STORY

CAN'T WAIT UNTIL Catherine comes home and Mom gets horny.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

What a lucky guy,,,the only male with Mom, 2 horny sisters, and an oversexed beautiful business partner's wife...

Al_HAl_Hover 6 years ago
Loving it!

Can't wait to read the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tree planting

The moment that they are doing something that you actually do for work and you start analyzing how deep the hole is, what the saturation might be, etc. XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I could have done without the daddy daughter locked door if that's what it was. Mom daughter is ok. Daddy stuff is creepy. Uncle/ older neighbor isn't much better. So here's to hoping for alex it fuck all the women first. Otherwise what was the point of having him as the protagonist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
A large, clear buttplug shot out

“Fuck,” the black woman swore. “That fucking butt plug won’t stay in no way. My asshole just too damn big.” She paused to look at me and smiled. “At least I don’t get constipated no more. Shit just fall right out.”

I grimaced, stammered an excuse and ran out of that fucked up house.

giogustogiogustoalmost 2 years ago

I don't understand why the authors make the main characters a mental retard, the rage of a slow character that because of a silly thing the story only gets 2 stars for that

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