All Comments on 'Kelly and Brooke Ch. 03'

by Let_it_Be_

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Omg

WHAT. You can't just leave us like that! But very good, keep up the great work, I cant stop reading :)

WistfulSeniorWistfulSenioralmost 13 years ago
Just Not Cricket!

That is just not fair. You can't leave us hanging like that. I am so enjoying every word of your story. I love the way it flows back and forth between the viewpoint of Kelly and Brooke. You have a wonderful way of expressing the emotions of the character. I do hope this story goes one for awhile. I look forward anxiously to each chapter.

WistfulSeniorWistfulSenioralmost 13 years ago
PS

Bye the bye, anyone not voting a strong 5 on each of these chapters is just not with the program. It doesn't get much better than this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WOW

this story is sooo great, the writing style is easy to read and flows together so perfectly. i know each of the characters and never get confused on whos saying what or who did what. not to mention the great detail of whats going on. GOOD JOB!..im very much so WET lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

AGAIN ANOTHER HOT CHAPTER!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
AHHHHHHH!!!!

Please say it's a misunderstanding! Please? They belong together! So fucking hot!!! ~ L

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