All Comments on 'Kelly and Brooke Ch. 04'

Great story, besides a few grammatical errors here and there. If you need to, get an editor. It helps having a second set of eyes looking over your work. Keep up the good work! I love how the romance is building between Kelly and Brooke.

...........just WOW !!........Good ending,Thanks.

You have a wonderful way of expressing emotion in your writing. You are able to take the reader on the highs and lows right along with the characters. I loved this story and really hope you continue writing. You have quite a talent.

My girlfriend broke up with me over the phone in virtually the exact same way that Brooke broke up with Scott. Although there were some differences -- I had openly hoped to keep the relationship long distance and didn't break up with her before the fatal phone call -- she, like Brooke, fell in love with the first person she was attracted to (in this case an ex-boyfriend) and I was out of her life forever. I seriously considered committing suicide after the breakup and have never recovered. I 1-bombed this story for this reason and no other. I wanted to apologize and hope I enjoy your other work.

In writing me beforehand to warn me of the breakup, my girlfriend said: "I don't want to loose you," misspelling it the same way you did. That hurt extra badly. I could and perhaps should have submitted this comment anonymously but I didn't want to act like a troll.

I really love this series, I can't get enough

LOVED IT!

I fully agree with @WistfulSenior's comments (5/22/11). You've created two very sweet, sexy, beautiful characters. Please give us more soon!

5 stars for this whole series! I'm in love with your characters. Too bad they are taken. :) ~ L

I am in love with this story an the characters please continue I must know what happens next!

O M G, This Is A One of The Best Series Of Stories.

If It's Not too Late (7 - Months After Chpt 4) I'd like

To Vote For A Chapter 5 & 6 To Update On Kelly &

Brooke Please !

That has to be the best story I have ever read it basically has everything, it was like i.was there feeling there feelings!! You have to make more like it :)

Wow!! This was one of the best stories ever. I hated to see it end. It was perfectly written. I hope to see more chapters in the future about Brook and Kelly's continuing relationship.

Proper loved it!

one of best ive ever read !! another one getting married,having a chilkd would also be nice!95d9

can you make another chapter of this.It was just so good,very realistic and very addictive.

This is by far the best story i have read in a long time!! More please!!

will there? fun story :)

I loved this. You should keep writing. Chapter 5!!!!

What a great story! it had me all hot and bothered, and then it brought tears of joy to my eyes. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us!