All Comments on 'Kelly Didn't Know She Had Them'

This story is extremely hard to follow. Whole pieces of the scenes are often left completely out, making me have to go back and try to make sense of what's happening. For example, when Kelly ties Mac's hands and feet together, the next sentence says that for two hours he begged Kelly to let him cum. If Mac is tied up the way you say, then what is she doing to excite him? He's so bent together it isn't possible for her to suck him. When one must constantly retread every few sentences, it resins the flow of the story and the entire story. I might ad that a feminim form or female form best describe a woman, not that of a feline (a cat).

Really liked your story. Your erotic fiction is great. Thanks.

Nothing sexy about an unfaithful slut! 1*

is neither incest or taboo. Put this story where it belongs. In the waste basket.

too much family to be real