All Comments on 'Kelsey Loves the Kissing'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
MARION SOUNDS LIKE A FUN FEMALE

I like the seduction of clothing removal and discovery. Equally, I like women who have hair on that love muscle.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 9 years ago

What a lovely read (said in my best English accent, which is not very good, I'm afraid). And looking so forward to the menage `a trois

redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

all good except the cheating thing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Need to make this continuing series ;-) 5* !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well done!!!!

Might I suggest that you unleash your feminine side more often.

Perhaps some more episodes might garner more comments.

All in all a very erotic story

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent Penmanship

An excellent erotic tale and plot.....to have a continuation involving Marion would be great, I do hope that you will consider expanding this story.

One of the best that I have read for some time.

Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

capturing the essence of Sapphic love = a little male bashing. Yet the seductress (Carla) is using her position of power to "seduce" Kelsey.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
don't want to read...

...a Saphigment of a man's imagination about FF relations.

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