All Comments on 'Kim's Naked Adventure'

There were a few minor ( not many) typos and grammatical issues. Getting someone to proofread might help. The ending, I felt could have been stretched out to another chapter or twelve, but for the sake of the contest I understand you needed to finish it.

Generally though, I enjoyed it a lot. Well done.

A thoroughly enjoyable story. Thanks for the effort and good job.

This was a great story.It was very creative. I hope you keep writing ! thank you