by BigMadStork
I always enjoy reading your stuff, I don't know anything about writing but for some reason the way you write keeps me interested. I can honestly say I have never fell asleep reading your stuff. This guy has problems that all of us men need, great work can't wait for the next part.
This is getting better and better. I mean it has very, great start from first chapter long lots of sex and details!!!!!!!! Like when he left but came back perfectπππππππ more control but better understanding of thinks himself and other peopleπππππππ. Thank you
A very great written story, hope to hear more about Kinky Tina soon!
Yet another great story. I have read almost everyone of you stories and can honestly say I really enjoy them. Sister Needs a Hand and Three Wicked Sisters being my all time favorites of any stories here on the site.
How can anyone like your writing you need to add some sense to things, no one tells coworkers that he is involved with family. Sexual writing can be intelligent and sensible, just not yours.
An improvement for the early chapters.
I am glad you are treating Tina better and not abusing her.
Looking forward to Beth joining the group.
I like that he's taking care of his women and that he makes them happy. He's being a real man this time instead of a whiny bitch that doesn't recognize his responsibilities to his women.
But women get possessive when a man makes them so happy. I'm surprised that twp are willing to share him even if they are related. Adding in an outsider could be a recipe for big trouble. I'll read chapter 3 and see what you do with it.