All Comments on 'Kiss Me, Charlene'

But enjoyable, just the same.

Thanks for sharing.

Once I started reading I could not stop. I love the premise and would like to see where this story goes. Thanks for a very titillating tale.

I though this was a good story too bad it was not a little longer

As a story it has promise but unfortunately, you rushed it. If you had written three or four pages building the characters and storyline slowly it would have been a great read.

I hate the short paragraphs. The writing just doesn't flow. And "Whomever was ringing the bell" is just wrong. It should be "whoever".

JimBob, Maybe you can write another as to what happens to Sharon. You know how those female Vampires are, eat and run, never heard of again. :)

Another great story , Would love to read more of the story.good luck Jasmine

This is a gem! I discovered accidentally, it should be a next chapter ..i hope.

Carrie meets Interview with a Vampire. Not good.