All Comments on 'Kiss of the Viper'

I loved your story. It was not some kind of "one-hander" like so many others, but had a slow and building quality. Your character development was superb.

Very nice charater building. I would love to read more stories about these charaters.

I'll keep it simple: damn fine character development that is often lacking in this genre. An impressive piece, and I look forward to more work from you in the future.

This was unbelievable. I rarely come across a story that completely captivates me. This story is one of those rare ones.

You certainly have a way with words. Interesting story that had a twist at the end. Thanks

This. yarn didn't grab me so much. Well told but I guess the willing suspension of disbelief

wasn't willing. Still, most competently constructed. I guess it's a matter of taste. There's nothing wrong with yours, so it must be mine.