All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 04'

Do keep up with the story as I love the way you have of telling it creative

I wasn't expecting the humour! It's a brilliant addition to your story.

this was a really great chapter . . both in the wonderful comparisons between the cultures as they both learn more about each other . . and the humorous parts :-) . . . and CATNIP! . . . LOL that was inspired *G* . . . . the stoned kitty into the hand covering his mouth . . this was a fantastic chapter with an ending that has me eagerly looking forward to the next chapter *S* . . . this is what the old movie "Enemy Mine" should have been :-D

I'm enjoying your tale. Thanks for sharing it with us.

GOD I LOVED the part about the catnip as it topped the whole chapter, stoning the kitty OOH that is such a riot!!

it may have been a wait for this chapter but it was so worth it, PLEASR keep them coming.

ppl really need to get sober themselves by one comment actually camparing enemy mine to this story proves they are on SOMETHING, this is such a far better story

I'm finding this story very entertaining. I've been waiting all week for a new post. I really love your character development and use of humor. Catnip. who'd-a-thunk-it! Thanks. Keep up the good work.

UNBELEVABLE!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't get enough.

Seattle WA USA

I'm really enjoying this story, and the catnip part was awesome. lol Keep up the great work!

Excellent story with good development, humor, and suspense. I am also one of the people who have been waiting for a week - this is the top story I'm following.

its funny easy to read and looks to have a long time in developing

Very creative!! I love these characters! They have so much personality! You are doing a terrific job explaining who they are as individuals while also explaining their back rounds! I love the humor! This is a well written and easy read. This is so different than other stories on Literotica ! You are one of my new favorite writers! I love the suspense but don't make us wait too long for the next installment!

"and even the smoke from the camp fire seemed to be interfering with ...the smoke"

I love his line!

I love it all! I also love your Garden of Eden stories! I need more more more more!

Thank you! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

more and more fun with each chapter I read. Now I'm really looking forward to your next post. Nice cliffhanger ending too. Update soon! Thx.

Great story, I've enjoyed reading it so far. Looking forward to future posts. Who wouldn't find a real version of catwoman exciting.

I cannot believe how much I was looking forward to this chapter, I've checked the sight many times a day between chapters, I have never followed a story here like I have followed yours thus far. Please keep up the wonderful work, many thanks, and I wait the new chapters anxiously.

This is one of the best rides yet

PLEASE KEEP IT COMING AND QUICKLY I AM SOO INTERESTED IN WHAT HAPPENS TO HER AND HIM NEXT SHE IS NOT GOING TO SHOOT HIM I THINK THERE IS SOMETHING OUTSIDE THE CAVE THAT WA ATTRACTED BY THE SMOKE ....

Please don let this be the last chapter.

We are waiting further adventures of this couple. Don't let this story stop here.

What does she do? That is the question and cliffhanger. Loving the ride your story is giving me.

use catnip... finally some action

NOW he is wondering why she can speak English? oO doh

Just found this story in March 23rd., 2022, I think it's one of the best story's I have read since I found Literotica about a year ago. It saddens me to fined out that Chapter 14 which was dated 06.22.17, was the last of the story and that was almost 5 years ago. Chapter 14 left things open and I would like to see the two main characters bring peace to both peoples, and maybe see them return to the planet they were on. Also did you do a book on this story would like to know hope to see the end to this great story that you started

I'm hooked if I have to wait years after part 5 I'll shit you would't believe how many writers and there pretty good how they start a story but stop and and they never finish they are not as hafe as good as annaballe she is the author of home of horny monsters you should check her out and so far, you and her are on the same par as they say,I couldn't put it down so I hope it's longer then upon a savage shore that's a great story so I hope it's a long long series. have a Blessed Day

Excellent, voted five

Okay. A fair story so far.

It is just a drawn out story to tease the "Are they gonna have sex?" crowd.

First failure of most 'Crash' 'Survivor' stories is leaving the crash site unless there is a sound reason to.

Second failure is once you do find/make shelter Never going back for more gear/supplies.

So this is just a delayed 'Please Please let them have sex' story.