All Comments on 'Knight vs. Succubus'

There should be a Lady knight who specializes in succubus slaying, but could fall prey to a incubus.

Normally I don't go for erotic horror stories, but the title caught me and I really enjoyed it. Good Read.

Darkly erotic and delicious, and well written, too! Thanks!

This is better than the other story based on the same premise, if you ask me. Much darker, more in tune with your other succubus stories.

Oh, and regarding the comment about a female demon hunter... I think the premise was alluded to previously, in a reference to Buffy the Vampire Slayer. A third story similar to this and the other ends with a passing mention of a "female Slayer from Sunnydale," if memory serves.

You right some of the sexiest horror stuff around. One thing to consider could we see some work from the POV of the Succubus, It would be nice to get some more dimention to the characters such as you did in the Summoning series.

Please keep it up and post with continued regularity

This Sucubus story is perrrrrfect. Oh yeh, say helo to Phil from all os us.. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE.

I just love reading your work. It's pleasantly dark and extremely hot. Have you thought about continuing this story and show how the soul becomes corrupted. Maybe it leads to an alternate dimension of sorts where the soul is constantly succumbing to her evil wiles. Just a thought. Can't wait for the next read.

Glad you posted this up, it was far too good not to have seen the light of day.<BR><BR>

My two major thoughts after reading this are firstly that you were spot on about having written a deliciously diabolical succubus. One of your best femme fatales I'd say. Secondly, I loved the moment where he decided to go back to challenge her, hopeless nobility is a joyous thing.<BR><BR>

As ever, thanks for sharing a great story and looking forward to your next one.

LOVED it! Keep up the great writing!

I did not like the dark part of the story, especially the part where his little sister dies. That does go a bit far. Maybe she survives?

great writing yet again!!

Looking foward to a part 2!

Works on it's own.

Having read both stories, I must say that I like this one much more. The succubus seems more capable and fearsome... and sexy. The darkness of this story really works with the demonic themes. Well done, and now I'l have to read more from you.

great story. Why did you call the knight Marcel? I like how his 'noble' ideals made him especially vulnerable.

I liked both of your stories featuring Esqeta. She is so delightful treacherous :)

Your stories are a near-perfect mix of sex and horror. They're just so deliciously warped. It's amazing that you haven't written a full-length original novel yet; you're certainly talented enough to do so.

This was the first story I read on Literotica and It got me into the site. It was some time ago, but now that I made an account I just wanted to stop in and thank you for a good read and acknowledge this story for getting my feet wet!

That's a really great story. I wish it would have a sequel.

Great writing

This is such an amazing story, you truly have a talent for succubi stories, yours are the best on here hands down

She did say she’ll keep her soul inside and release him, suggesting his soul is still in there somewhere and in a way alive, right?

This is the perfect example of how a succubus should be. Playful, predatory, and best of all she shows first hand what happens to a soul that she sucks out. Absolute perfection.