All Comments on 'Kowalski'

Will you be finishing "A New Dawn" ?

Thanks for sharing it. Please continue!

LOVED IT KEEP GOIN. I WILL KEEP AN EYE OUT FOR SEQUELS

Brilliant, more very soon I hope.

Loved it up to the point where the story is leaning towards incestuous.

nice and sweet another chapter

Love where it's going. Hopefully about 20 chapters

Second time reading this. Great start but when are we going to get the the rest of the story to read, hopefully there's lots more to come but when?

This story looks promising. Hope it's not discontinued!

Great vibe.

Everything Ive read of yours has a fantastic blend of romantic sentiment and quirk. Thumbs up.

What is or will be the title of the next installment? You must continue writing and make a series of this story.

But the longer time passes with nothing added the more unlikely it becomes.

Cheers, great story please continue, potential for many many chapters.

OK, you. It's been over a year now! Time for you to add a chapter or two ... or ten?

How many of these POTENTIAL WINNERS do you have started and unfinished!!!!

LOL.

Please finish some of these!!

LOL

Now that you're back writing I hope that you can continue this as well as New Dawn.

More of this one! Great story, excellent plot-line! Make time for a series. This has excellent potential!

I live in Bend, wish this would happen to me, lol. Hope you continue the story

Hmmm, interesting!

Kowalski has a great premise. I hope you build on it. This story is well written and was fun to read.

I am just starting on your bookshelf in the Literotica Library. I hope there are more gems there. I also hope some have endings as well as beginnings.

Thank you for sharing your storytelling talent with us.

This story is a fantastic start to what could be an amazing series! Please keep writing.

Great story! I hope there is a sequel!

Great start to a story. Will there be more? I certainly hope so for Mrs Kowalski’s sake.

Amazing story. It gave me ideas for a follow up!!!

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BJ

Oh shit you..please we need like what paul harvey use to say..and the rest of the story..lol... Great story you have going please bring the next chapters..5strong🌟

Loved it... again... I read this about 2 years ago. Thanks again for sharing!

I hope you will write more of this one. Very good storyline and characters. Thank you

Frog 308

WHAT?!?!?! You're stopping there? This was posted on 07/07/16 so unfortunately, I don't think there's going to be a continuation...

And it was such a great start! :-(

Great story, the science fiction as well as the erotic aspects. By the way, Kowalski is also the name of the driver in Vanishing Point - I can't describe him here, except to say he is an extraordinary human in his own right. If you decide to continue the story... well, that's up to you. Whatever the case, I, like so many here, would love to read a continuation of this story. And poor mom, its clear she's wanted more of a relationship with her son than she is supposed to have, according to the norms of the self-destructive, childish, self-referential and pathetically judgmental society in which they live. In which we live. Great job, like many of your stories. You are a very talented writer. All of your erotic work that I've read is terrific - great story, great characters, and great sex. Thank you. My only complaint is, your nom de plum - chunks? Sorry, but I can only picture vomit, which makes no sense for anything in your writing. But that's a minor problem, and I can deal with it, I'm sure. Write on!

Different than most, but disappointing that it's not continued.

Hope to be able to read lots more of this story (if you have time to continue it).

Think? Nothing, except disappointment.

The most unsatisfactory truncation of a tale I’ve ever read. From a 5 to a 2 rating.

Bill S.

Like many others, I would very much like to read a continuation of this story. I don't quite understand why, when you have written a couple other - one in particular - extended story, you did not continue this one, which seems made for it. Also, as many other of your readers, I appreciate your writing, tremendously. You are truly talented writer - I am also thinking of your other work that you've produced here. I don't know if you know that or not, but you truly are.

Thank you for a lovely and hot story. Please consider continuing their story. 🤗 😘