by TxRad
I love your work, but this is not your best. It kinda seemed like a paint by the numbers. Sorry, Leighllly
Very well written. Greatly descriptive of the feelings, as well as the eroticism.
Keep them cumming
Mr.Greene never knew what he had been missing. I'm glad his later years are filled with love and sex. I really enjoyed the story of his introduction to the lifestyle. Thank you. JudyLee
One of the best, and most erotic, stories I've ever read. Very well written. Highly descriptive of the action and the feelings and emotions of the participants.
Loved the story but felt the ending was a little rushed going from neophyte to dom in 3 pages. Still that doesn’t detract from how erotic the story was.
Tess (uk)