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eleventhsoneleventhsonover 4 years ago
Devastating twist

That was a great story twist! I wish you could have added just a little more to it at the end, there. Or, perhaps have him be the redemption and second chance. I suppose that could still happen, regardless of how things work out with the father. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Divorce??

Did he flle?

mondotokenmondotokenover 4 years agoAuthor
Re: Anonymous-Divorce?? Did he file?

Sequel posted: 10/26/2019

Title: Laotian Boss-Dara Vong

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