All Comments on 'Kyle's Revenge'

Stupid story.

Please locate the device you used to write this and have it incinerated. Twice. Put the ashes in an hermeticaly sealed container and ship the container to Virgin Galactic. Explain to them that you are the author of a story worse than any Vogon poet. Then explain the steps you took to destroy the offending device. I am sure they will dedicate a special flight to ship everything one way to deep space.

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Stupid

Worst story I’ve read

10yr old threw a temper tantrum

😂😂

CRAP! So much for standards around here.

Give it up, and seek psychiatric care. Seriously.

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I guess you were not in the mood to use your brain.... *

Hysterical.

Give more detail to the sex

Gave this a rhhree ( 3 ) only because I am sympathetic towards the author. Perhaps ann average rating might induce him/her to see tutelage in both writing and pornography.

Should literotica ask, yes, keep writing,you have to get better . ..

Ridiculous, but still funny, lol

Totally under par.

Just hope the writer has not become an out in space submarine driver.....

OK a little out there but I still liked the story minus the intro and the fast pace of it besides that all good in my books

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Trash

That was... words. Apparently 750 of them. It was not a story, nor well thought out. Neither erotic, nor humorous nor entertaining. 1*

Amazingly stupid, and just poor writing to boot...

Um yeh ok. WTF?