All Comments on 'Lacey'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
not bad

I guess she will be shopping for underwear at that store more often

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
That was cute!

Why cant real life be so easy and spontaneous?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

So where is this store? I think i'd like to go there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sweet!

This is a very sweet story.

The pace fits the story and Sheri's emotions perfectly, and your style of writing is very attractive.

Hope to see more (and longer?) stories like this.

MaonaighMaonaighover 7 years ago
Implausible

In fact, highly implausible. Nevertheless, an enjoyable little story. You can write well enough, so why not try something longer next time, taking your time to develop the plot and the characters---a high proportion of readers find longer tales so much more satisfactory. Give it a shot.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Nice story

Short, but highly erotic. Could we persuade you to extend this one by a couple of chapters?

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