All Comments on 'Lacey and Olivia'

Not only was this hot but the writing and dialog were so witty I was completely sucked in. One of the best stories I have read on this site and believe me, I've read a bunch. Please keep it up.

A Fantastic LOVE STORY Is What You Have Witten.

I LOVED It Very Much. Being A Lipstick Lesbian I

Very Nearly Cried At The End. As The Two Love Birds

Became Parents Thanks To Help From Their Very

Understanding Dorm Friend.

Kisses KF

i say this as a guy who loves lesbians but also as a person who loves to read erotica this is a great story

This was absolutely the best erotic story I have ever read, good work.

That I do believe is the best story I have every Read on here. It brought a tear to my eye absolutely amazing please keep writing if you don't we'll be losing an incredible writer

But I did. There were a LOT of grammatical mistakes in it. It needed an editor something fierce and they distracted and annoyed me time and again. In spite of that, when I was all done you ended it on such a great quip that I slipped in a 5 anyhow. C'est la vie...you done good. Now get an editor!

Sappy? Oh no, my dear, this was far from sappy. Indeed, I feel it's the finest thing you've written (which is evident from it's overwhelming appeal, and ratings).

Here you've written one of the most refreshing stories I've read in some time. Your characters are fab, your dialogue pops with humor and realism and the relationships and sexual situations you create are not only believable, but incredibly hot!

I positively LOVED Olivia and Lacey! You made these two lovelies live and breath, jumping right off the page! Brava!

What's more, I'm so pleased you didn't bog down this charming, endearing romance with something heavy like BDSM or similar. Finding a good romance here is somewhat of a rarity lately, or at least one that isn't some bad parody of a Harlequin Romance gone wrong.

I do hope you write more about these girls and their adventures as I'd love to read more about them.

In this instance you live up to your moniker, giving us a taste of the sweetest thing ;3 Well Done!

It somehow managed to be erotic but captivating too. Not something many of the writers here pull off.

Wow, lovely story. Refreshing to read a story that was engaging, sweet, funny and sexy all at once. I loved the characters, which I find rare. Please continue! 5 stars

Love it, love it love it.

You are an awesome writer, that I am able to get by the typos and mistakes

Delightful read. Good, novel story. Nicely concluded. This author is "big time"!

Love that it was a loving partnership! Not just a one night stand,"wham bam thank you ma'am."

A wonderful story of friendship, some nice touches of character development, and some very hot sex scenes. Finishing up with a family and friendships still strong was a very classy choice. Thank you very much.

p.s.

please take this as enthusiastic encouragement to write more. ;-)

This was a fantastic & detailed story of friendship, lust & love that was erotic & touching at the same time. Wonderful character build ups & the inclusion of Fitz just added so nicely to the story. This is a must read & the 2 epilogues just put this story over the top when it comes to spectacular endings!

I loved the how you crafted the friendship between your three main characters. You write very well and you've become one of my favorite writers. I can honestly say that for the first time ever while reading on this website, I actually laughed out loud. You gave us a wonderfully written story and I cannot wait to read more from you. Please keep writing.

Such a sweet story! I absolutely loved it. Thank you. ~ L

Can I have my own Olivia please? Thank you. Lol

This was a great story, loved it.

This is such a sweet and adorkable story! I love it! And hot sexeh times too! I really enjoyed your sotyr. Thank you for sharing with us :-)

Well well well! What do u know u just made 3 of ur stories into my fav ever your stories are so special and. The fact is i usually just like staright to the sex stories but with u nah uh i love reading the story more tha. Just the insane sex ofc. Really really love ur stories and lol im glad to say i have my own olivia and tracy nothing better than a bit of both. Looking forward for more of your stories

This was an amazing read. I should have been asleep about 45 minutes ago, but I had to keep going. You need to continue writing because that was just amazing.

PS - Amazing. I just had to make sure you know it was...well, you know.

Excellent one. So realist yet so intriguing.

i'm in love with this story.

It was a really good story and i greatly enjoyed it. I plan on looking to see what else this author has written. The last line really made me laugh a great way to end it.

As always... I just love the way you groove and work your way to each of your stories... its not even suprising i so love each and everyone of your stories... read it so many times and yet each and everytime it feels new hoping to see more from you <3

Very interesting; this story kept me engaged the entire time. The ending totally topped off the story.

go canada :)

You're absolutely fantastic! Your writing style is simply awesome! Your dialogues are funny and alive! Please please please write more! You're just so good at it!

Don't you want to share some ideas and some of those obvious talents you have?!

To be brutally honest, I ended up SKIPPING OVER the sex at the back end. I was instead enthralled at the characters -- so massively lifelike -- characatures in some ways, over the top, but yet, so real. Lacey is vivid in my head now. I think I'm tempted to ask for Lacey's cell number or email, but must be reminded, she's fictional. ("Lacey," same spelling, also is a multiple-appearing character in some of my own stories, but this Lacey is far more textured than mine.) This wasn't a piece of erotic fiction... its a fucking WORK OF ART. Someone should build a temple to it.*

The author should STOP wasting her time with these stupid Literotica stories. Really. Because they are free. She's going to get PAID to write someday, if not already. Someone call a writing agent and sign her up!!!

* I stole that from John Lennon, who made that comment about "2001: A Space Odyssey." It seems to apply here.

Believable characters, situations, and dialog, plus scortchingly hot sex. What a wonderful and rare combination. Plus the end had me smiling and crying; yet another aspect missing from so many other writer's work. If you aren't already planning on becoming a professional writer, then the world of literature will likely be missing a potentially great addition to their ranks.

Keep it up. You are a great story teller. I like how you made it sound like a movie with the tie ends of the dates, cause it creates a creative flare to your work.

You have the knack, and each of your stories is, indeed, the Sweetest Thing.

Awww, this was an adorable story with believable characters and hot sex scenes. Keep on writing. ^ u ^

The characters are great and very real and believeable, the sex scenes are so nicely written and simply hot! And to add to all this awesomeness, it has a good plot with a pretty touching and sweet story, personally I WAS touched by it. :') In short, a great read, I'd totally recommend! :D I read your stories one by one and damn, you're such a great writer!

You should write ero books and post them on Kindle store. You'd became famous in no time. Nice plot, best characters I ever saw, fine writing skills...

I'll wait for more.

Good luck.

Great story, I loved reading it and the characters were so believable. I loved the ending, unlike most stories leaving you hanging. Please keep up the good work.

Would have loved if you took your sweet time reaching the end

A cute must read story with all the elements of pain, conflict, joy, and an element of surprise at the end. I absolutely loved the story. SweetestThing is an exceptional writer and her stories are good reads.

Simply a lovely story, touching, heart-warming, funny---you name it, Lacey and Olivia has got it. Plausible plot-line, believable characters, nice ending. And I laughed out loud at Fitz's dietary experiments (well, I laughed out loud when he wasn't making me feel ill!). Thanks, Sweetest, for the enjoyment this tale gave me.

love it, then ending is great too. Thanks for wrapping it up so cutely;)

L

This is one of the sweetest things I've read on this site. I'm honestly kinda sad there's not more.

Thanks for this bit of lovely.

You do good romance. And I love your sense of humor.

The dialogue was funny, the romance was sweet, and the sex was hot! Please keep writing stories like this!

Such likable characters-Fitz superb companion/counterpoint to the ladies...

Really great dialogue, and HOT

Loved and faved the stories of yours I've read so far...

Going to ration myself on unread...hope you're still active-will know in a sec. TX!

Loved it. Comfortable building of their destiny. 5🌟's

How do I even begin to praise you for this lovely piece of writing you've so graciously bestowed upon us mere mortals.

You elevate erotica to a level that I'm not sure anyone could ever match. Your characterizations are perfect. You know exactly who these characters are and how their journey to the story is going to end, and you do it beautifully.

The perfect amount of smut, humor, and world building so perfectly executed and I just not only want to read the smutty parts, but actually care about the characters.

In short you good sir or madam are a master of your craft and I'd seriously implore you to start publishing your work or something because as I said you are a master of your craft

I have read several of your stories as a straight male. I absolutely love the love in your lesbian stories. I typically skim through the heavier sex scenes as I don't directly relate to some of it, but the relationship, the romance, the joy contained between your couples blows me away. I found myself dreaming the last couple days that I was a woman in one of these relationships and find myself hoping now that if reincarnation exists, I get to experience something like this.

Thank you for your wonderful stories and I hope you keep writing. You are good enough to get paid but I am selfish enough that even if you do, I hope still drop some here for your fans. :)

Your stories have a great variety of characters and settings.

Many, many thanks.

Had me riveted from beginning to end. Perfect length (not long, and drawn out). Loved the epilogue's too.

And I loved it.

The sexual parts were good, really good, but the story overall was fantastic.

Thank you.

5 Stars.

As well as great, well-plotted stories, you have a talent for creating amusing but thoroughly real male secondary characters: Tim in this story, Damien in "Valkyries & Vixens", Alex and Josh in "The Christmas Bonus". They all deserve their own little niche in the Lesbian Story Hall of Fame.

thank you for writing something so incredibly awesome and connected. It restores some of my faith in literotica to find special Gems like you.

You literally made my entire week with this.

~R.

You write incredibly well. The characterization, the pacing, both excellent. You also write great sex, which is literally, ridiculously difficult to get right; not too fast (although I don't slow) not too graphic, nor too convoluted, neither was it hilariously unbelievable . It's as hard as comedy (and you do a pretty good job of that too.

Damnit I'm jealous!

And I'm so glad I finally found it. Thank you for sharing this with us!

I've read this a few times and always love it. You are great writer. Wish it was longer .

I felt a lot of the story was sadly rushed but other than that it was good. great characters and story line. There was something missing from it. The lack of love. Lust yeah. Love not much.

why Lacy switched teams. I reread it looking for a why and it was never clear to me. The best I can think is that if she hadn’t, there’d be no story. Solid 4*.

I loved the characters and the bond that they share. I did feel the story was complete however I am greedy and would have enjoyed it being a little more thorough, but hey it was still great. Please write more similar to this because you are gifted. Plus stories with more depth are always better than those simply to get someone from A to B in like 60 seconds.

A wonderful story! Thank you!

Love the story but you do know that Feb 13, 2007 was a Tuesday. Lol

Sorry that's my BD so I do know them all. Like re-reading this one.....

Awww loved this story!!!

A thoroughly enjoyable story as I would expect from this author, but, really, the cold night in the dorm room, and the logical talk and decision before acting on feelings? Awkward.

Second run and still love this story .......a great romance and a marvelous happy ending with the three of them still one

Another brilliant story, thanks.

I so hope you return. There is absolutely nothing about your stories I don’t love completely! Wherever you went, I hope you’re well

And wasn't Abby a complete idiot!

Very sweet story

So, here I am, reading this great story again, only 23 days later.

Go figure.

I realized within about six paragraphs I had read this story before, but it is so damned good that I couldn't put it down.

Where ever you are, I wish you all the best and hope your return. I so enjoy your stories.

Great story, I'm so glad that you did the two epilogues and leave us poor readers hanging.

This is a great story, thank you.

Like below loved the story, possibly more so with second reading. Where ever you are I wish you well and thanks for these wonderful stories

what a great story. the second one have read of yours, not disappointed. had certain parallels withStation19 which I find compelling.

I do like a story that builds, sets the scene, not overtly obvious, slightly erotic and good finish. just like making love. I might just have to go and lie down in a quiet room.

I've read all your work. While this was just as deep into the characters as the others, I loved the bantering humor between the proper New England prep queen and the Texan "well howdy" prom queen, each with their backgrounds and predispositions but at the same time open enough to over time accept and "absorb" the other in entirely luscious ways that you expressed so well. Lovely, just lovely.

First time reading this one. Another brilliant work, if I do say so myself

Brilliant. And genuinely funny too!