All Comments on 'Ladies of the Lake Ch. 04'

Excellent story 7.

From start to finish captivating

Might there be a sequel?

Great set of stories,as was the ending. Thought you might tell the readers how there 18th b-day bash went

Wow, i like your writing.

I see many openings in this story to continue on, please do

What a well written original story. It appears you have a wonderful imagination. I hope like many others that you continue the story.

I liked the story right up to the point you snuffed out 4 lives to let 4 others who had long long lives continue to live.

Merged. Notice that the story mentions that the girls have some of Sharon's features. The essence of each woman was merged with an unborn child. The children are thus born with 'old souls'. Make sense?

that is all WOW

And to the guy who commented on4/23/11 if that little story u told was real you are a lucky son of a bitch if not it still gave me a great mental image

...but a terrific change from the 'usual' -

Well done Julybear7 - a great story and very enjoyable !!

Thanks.

(...any more - Please ?...)

Great stuff.

great story man,.... anymore of this one coming or should i say cumming????

I am guessing since it has been 5 years the author does not intend to finish this story.

that is too bad, it had so much potential.

Another chapter just to complete this story would be nice as I loved every word thank you.

Wow oh wow, what and absolute pleasure i had reading this.

You could have taken out the sex and i would still have enjoyed it.

You have a skill beyond words and if i were you would seriosly consider writting for a living.

Thankyou...

.….you simply HAVE to love it !!

Thanks to julybear7 - anymore?

What an absolutely amazing story. I LOVED IT !!! Thanks so much for the fantastic story of love through the ages. I love witchcraft themes as long as they are about good and loving witches. KUDOS to a well done dream story.

Sorry I did not do feed back on the 1st three chapters but I wanted to see how it ended. Love the story, think it is great. AAAAAA++++++

Enjoyed, but the author was a dabbler in magic lore. Male witches are witches or shamans (depending on the specific tradition). Warlock means either "oath breaker" or"cannibal" depending on context, and is associated with those working toward evil ends or for evil gods. Those more familiar with pagan and Wicca traditions would not make such an obvious mistake in nomenclature; some practitioners might even consider it slanderous.

When julybear7 made his profile, he described himself as being over 70, and considering he hasn't posted anything since 2013, there's a good chance he's no longer alive. Yes, several of his stories beg for sequels, but be glad for what you have and feel to imagine the happy ending you want.

5* Slainté

I enjoyed the story, but I was disappointed by the ending (or lack thereof).