All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 21'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great Tale

Please keep the story line calmer .I don't think we need anymore super hero stuff as enough is enough

bruce22bruce22almost 11 years ago
Surealistic Stuff!

Will poor Steve survive, after all when he insists that he did not do Ms. Quick half of the guys in the USA will consider him a wimp!

I am wondering what will happen in Paris. Perhaps a kidnapping in Paris with Gwen or Paula being shipped off to a harem?

teedeedubteedeedubalmost 11 years ago
Paris

here we come. Who needs vampires when you have the French???

taurus1964taurus1964almost 11 years ago
Great Story Harddaysknight

But a teenage girl telling her mom and father that's she will be staying and sleeping with her boyfriend "Steve" in Paris? I think I would say no but HELL NO !! not until you are 18 or moved out on your own

But still great story * 5

StoryTeller2002StoryTeller2002almost 11 years ago
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Gwen should have got to kiss a lot of other guys too just to kinda be fair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Once

Once again Uncle Joe is left out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
When

When did they get the invite to go to Paris in the spring break.Michelle never mentioned a particular date.?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Anon, pay attention! !!

It was an open invitation. ....to be determined. Jeez

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

too much entertainment.

LwcbyLwcbyover 2 years ago

Kate is priceless and precious I can’t stop laughing at her...

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Is it safe to assume that you know how to joust? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. That's how to end a chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just enough really great entertainment.

Rapier875Rapier87512 months ago

Joust ?

Brilliant comment ! ;o)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Clearly they had great connections in government if they could get their passports as quickly as written. Oh, wait! This is fiction after all.

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