by Harddaysknight
Love it. Nicely done, nothing like a 16 year old to get things just a little out of kilter. The part with Kate is sooooo true to life.
Because I really, really like it. It has something for everyone. I don't comment after every chapter because I would just run out of words of praise. Keep em comin ....PLEASE.
loving wives gone to crap,your stories only thing going.keep writing great stories.
over in LW!
Kate has certainly stopped looking like a mature young lady. First the esteem issues with Steve saving her from herself. Now she if playing the role of headstrong little girl. Sorry but I am not sure that I like her anymore!
as usual. Had to wait too long! Keep 'em coming...... and thanks.....
no one talks like that. really.
world record for cheesiness.
@ anonymous. Nope! The world record for cheesiness would go to moogplayer :D
An earlier post, this year for New Year's one of the nice things I did for myself was to reread the series. I'm still very much enjoying the ride, and I'm starting to think I might want a Steve action figure
I've to hand it to you! In most of your works women, irrespective of their age, acts like spoiled pre teen divas! Is that intentional?
My third time reading this story it's great, if someone doesn't like it don't keep reading it.
Have you thought of giving it to a script writer? It would be at least as good as the Tom Clancy stories that are now films.
Finally a little conflict. I'm not saying I like conflict, but its perfectly natural amongst people and teens in particular.