All Comments on 'Lady in Red Pt. 02 Ch. 01'

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading what follows. Thank you for sharing.

For continuing this great story...

I'm sure this will make a great novel, and to find it here on Lit for free is just amazing.

So again thank you for sharing not only this story, but all of your stories.

C

Please! You cant leave it there :)

I am glad you decided to continue the series. Great job on the first chapter. I anticipate a great series.

7

Yes, Yes, and Yes!

Welcome Back HDK!

The entire world is overlooking the fact that she could have just called him the next morning.

Only one willing suspension of disbelief allowed per episode, and with your story premise you need to conserve your supply.

Love this story. Keep it coming.

Anonymous Andy

Given the ratings this series has been receiving I understand why you are continuing. You might like to be aware, however, that at least one reader is waiting patiently for you to resume writing for adults.

Steve, Gwen, and the gang ride again. Love it! She should have called but hey it was the night before they left for NY city right????

Looking forward to more. AND...

Thank you for all of the work.

Thank God, my fix for "The Lady In Red" series has been restored. Thank you HDK for all your amazing talent.

A very nice start to the second half. Eventually Gwen has to get smarter. Looking forward to the future chapters.

Gary

Thanks for resuming the LIR series, the wait is finally over. Yay!

Can a woman dance with a man while holding him close to her while he nibbles her neck and ear and not be rubbing her pussy against his hard cock? Can she do that while French kissing him? I would have some serious questions for a woman who swore she would not become romantically involved without ending it with me first.

Gwen had best stop feeling sorry for herself for getting caught kissing Jack and get honest the Steve while taking responsibility for her actions.

Perhaps some responsible adult will suggest/insist that Gwen have a drug screen performed. The activity at the club sounds a bit suspicious to me.

Loved it. Waiting for more!

Thank you for sharing your stories with us!

I mean how could a girl so smart, so mature and so in love with the first perfect man since Jesus; suddenly get so stupid? I find it totally unbelievable.

Making Gwen braindead is kind of a copout no ?I mean going clubbing ? slow dancing ? Kissing and not pulling back ?,those are actions of someone not serious about a relationship.

Certainly not someone who would remain true after marriage in tempting situations.

I missed something in the story....BUT.....Gwen is a FRESHMAN at Stanford in CALIFORNIA & the story indicates she's 18 years old.

The legal drinking age in Cali is 21.......how is it that she was served alcohol in a club at 18?????

No where else in the previous 32 chapters has Gwen EVER had a drink & all of a sudden she has two with Timberline????? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

As others have said here......how did she become BRAIN DEAD so quickly.

So far in this story Gwen has been SO IN LOVE with Steve she can't hardly breathe & out of the blue she's kissing a second rate singer....SHEESH!

You can & have done better than this in this story. This is just SILLY!

worse and worse...

*sigh* cheap drama.

but that's what makes it interesting

Did u expect?

In past chapters Steve and Gwen promise that no matter even if one of them gets overly friendly with others, the other will understand and they will stay together. Now suddenly the author gives Gwen another dose of the stupids, has her forget their promises, and sends the story into annoying tween-age drama.

The whole work is difficult to take with all the impossible heroics but it is interesting enough to cause me to try to suspend disbelief and keep reading. But I wish his characters would not be so inconsistent with their previous development.

I don’t understand why she didn’t call him in the taxi on her way back to her dorm or even better as she was walking into her room where Charlotte and the other girls were.

Very disapointing chapter. Gwen all of a sudden goes back to being a naive dumb ditz? Seriously?

And then to not call Steve and talk it out.

Mom is concerned but worried about 'losing clout"???? WTF.

And Steve didn't even call her.

Now with all this drama they are going to the opening of their movie. Yeah right.

The fact that one member of the "Royal Couple" had a brain fart is not unpredictable or unexpected. The unreality of an underage girl being served alcohol at a club in California is the problem.

Sorry Gwen but their is the Curb . She should have taken Charlette with her . That way she would of had someone watching her back .Notice She did not call Steve to tell him what happened ?

Gwen needs her ass kicked bigtime, this is a hard lesson for her to learn. For a smart girl she really is a dumbass to get caught out like this. But Steve will forgive her, we all know it.

5/5

Why is this not tagged as cheating?

You create Gwen as a super woman and then have her act as a moron. You really need to be more consistent in your character development.

A little overboard with her behavior. Would have been better if overdrinking had been emphasized.