All Comments on 'Lady in Red Pt. 02 Ch. 02'

Steve the all around BAMF to the rescue again.

Thanks HDK for continuing this story. It is always entertaining

But not happy he took his shirt off with Audrey - that will bite them on the butt

Another great chapter that is easily worth 5 stars. Thank you HDK.

Another 5 Star!

glad to see another episode, not so sure about the style of writing ie 5 years later, almost seems were heading for a hastily written" and they lived happily after..." which after such a great series would be a shame.

Another problem for Hammer

you have as a fan as long as you keep writing

Just a comment, the retro approach to events is OK, but it often doesn't carry the emotional impact that the "real time" narrative does. Nevertheless, I love it and I'm guessing you have a lot more to say in this book but are tying up loose ends.

I'm glad you are back and the story is rolling again.

Thanks for the hard work and the great story.

It is a little different going from present to past but it is intriguing. Thanks for continuing the saga. I love how his grandmother has come into the light. I also like the way you kind of blend this story with how his father was killed in similar circumstances. But you know me so I have to ask how soon is more coming.

Gary

Loved it, thank you for sharing your story with us! Waiting for Chapter 3!

Why is it ok for Hammer to kiss and have half naked women to rub up against him and everyone ges mad at her for one stupid kiss? Her family are a bunch of jerks!

what a pile of shit.

From the very outset of this series, HDK said this was a work of fiction and major imagination. Since the beginning, I have seen constant comments by "1* Anonymous" about how bad and "crappy" this series is. If that is the case, why is he/she still reading. If you feel the series is so bad, you must not value your time very much. Or, your only purpose for reading and commenting on stories is to be negative.

As for me, I this this series is wonderful. I commend HDK for continuing and ignoring the comments of people who can't even bother to be identified with their comments.

This is my third time reading these stories, and I know I will more than likely read them again. Thank you for the fantastic "Feel Good Story"

Dadams0649

Anonymous 3/28/15 do us all a favour and shut the fuck up

one scene at a time we take a look back from multiple points of view.

complete flexibility for the author and no problem with going sequential because there is no timeline.

I don't get it... the story is ok... some of the writing and situations seem bland to me... but it's just an average story... I really don't get the awe that hdk is held in... his stories are ok... and no doubt he has talent as a writer.. but so do thousands of others... no offence intended... but there are scores of writers and stories here that I think are better... jmo

-jaye-

Your comments made the point. You "think"these stories are nothing special. Others "think" they are. Different things for different people.

How come Lisa and Jason's wedding wasn't covered?.

How can Naomi callin a few favours,other thanSteve and Qwen she as no friends.?

Did we just skip 6 years forward? He's a plebe at Annapolis and suddenly, with no apparent time passing, he's an officer in an operational team?

NSW PREP 9 weeks

BUD/S Orientation 3 weeks

Phase 1 Basic Conditioning 7 weeks

Phase 2 Combat Diving 7 weeks

Phase 3 Land Warfare 7 weeks

SQT (SEAL Qualification Training) 26 weeks

59 weeks to your trident. More than a year. If, IF everything goes perfectly, and trust me, it never does.

What a load of hogwash.American TV cameras just happened to be in Colombia where the fighting was and whilst the fighting was going on three helicopters flew several thousand miles to arrive in time.Pure hogwash.

Dude, are you going to make an ass of yourself on every chapter? Your desire to complain and find fault is pathological. Most would stop reading if the story were hogwash. Your continuing with the story indicates you are enjoying it. You have made it this far and are still reading. Thanks.

The helicopters came in from ships in the Caribbean, not thousands of miles. Yes there were reporters at the location as a serious international agreement was being discussed.

How come it too Beatrice five years to visit Sparta.Also if Hardaysnight spent less time commentating on anonymous and more time writing,he might get the next load of crap out quicker than a year.

WTF do you have a brain tumor or something?

great 2nd chapter!

I guess Steve is Cuckold of the year . I think We all know who wears the pants in that family

Rambo has nothing on Steve Hammer !