by Harddaysknight
Another great chapter to add to a remarkable story. I hope the next chapter is posted soon.
This keeps getting better and better, can't wait to read the next installment.
best story ever on this site.
I definitely agree...all time favorite story line! The cliffhangers are killing me though...LOL!
Please tell me I won't have to wait a few weeks for the next chapter. This is a super story and actually the only story and author I read on this web site.
A cliffhanger! Go figure..........WRITE FASTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And this probably been asked before.
Do these kids sing any songs that were first released after their parents were born?
Enjoying most of the story, but gag a bit at times. At least I dont need to wait for new chapters to be issued.
They have been to get her for six years,yet Qwen is only two years into medical school.What happened to the missing three years?.
Just more repetitive crap.Cut out everyone constantly telling one another how they all love one another and this story would only be a page long.
Great story and there’s more to come. Looks like the perpetual “anonymous” is showing how clueless he is, you don’t go from high school into Med school ... better to keep your opinions to yourself, you’re removing any doubt of your character.
Outstanding story, I wish people would realize that it's fictional fantasy. But, I wish you would quit saying US NAVY Seals and just say Seals. The whole world knows who they are. I know it's nitpicking but those of us that can't write and have no imagination have to criticize. Outstanding story line and well written.