All Comments on 'Lady in Red Pt. 02 Ch. 12'

Thankyou for another great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. This is very easily worth 5 stars.

They attacked Ashley before Pete can start his job, it's a little drastic metod to keep somebody unemployed .

While this is a good chapter, no where in it is ANY mention of the reaction & fallout from Gwen & Steve's appearance before the Senate committee. As I recall the duo had released the video & some info to ALL the press & media outlets they could think of. I would think a lil' more detail about all that would enhance the story. As it is, the story seems to jump forward weeks and/or months at a time & you leave important happenings hanging.......

WRITE FASTER PLEASE!!!!

Every chapter maintains an unbelievable level of excitement and interest. Thank you for your story. Characters are likeable and the plot twists grab our attention. Can't wait for the next one.

aww come on you've left it on a cliff hanger again you don't need to ,great stories always get repeat readers ,alun

Thanks for continuing in this wonderful story.

Must admit got a bit teary eyed over the love and support for the veterans and active military.

C

You did it again.....

as always, thx......

what happened in the interim between the hearing, the election and now? How much time has elapsed? If they were able to dig up so much information on the committee members were they able to find out who the imposter was and who made Steve the sacrificial lamb in Iraq?

HDK - you actually believe this cr*p ?

Stevie became Theresa?

Why didn't she hire Mr Barnwell to help Ashley.How come she had rented an entire hotel floor before the election result was even known.How come Paula and Qwen knew Steve was going to ask Stephanie to take over from Ashley when he had only just decided,and no one would even know if Ashley would be Qwens personnel aid.

More repetitive crap.We got the picture chapters ago,no need for incessant repitition.

Your our comedy relief

I assume you only eat 1 potato chip from the bag because more than 1 would be repetitive crap.

Good series. I gotta ask, why doesn't Gwen transfer from Stanford to Johns Hopkins or another nearby stellar medical university?

2 things, 1) Vermont allows concealed carry without a license, so it does not issue CC licenses. 2) They ordered Pete a meal and beer, but he left before it was served.

Never a dull moment

5/5