by robinkhinke
Yes, I put this on Nifty as well, along with my other two submissions to date. The Nifty version is more liberal with the age gap, but I'm interested in the feedback opportunity Literotica provides. - Robin Khinke
But wished it was longer! Any chance of adding more? Thanks for sharing!
very well written, I really liked the part where she explained they way when we read books we are looking into their world, it is like the writers here are painting a picture are we can see it when we read it, the only part I did not like was when Angie jumped on lainey at the end of this story she should have controlled herself
Nice beginning, well written, so imaginative... Hopes she comes back... even if the story does not continue... Thanks.
What an engaging read!
impressive to read a story that is so descriptive and erotic while maintaining a great respect and affection towards the main characters. I really felt like I was in that library.
I hope to see a lot more from you!
Finally...someone hat can write ....please continue Lainey and Angies love affair.....great start....
This was delightful. Very well written. Will there be more of this story?
You are certainly more than the run-of-the-mill recreational writer. Very well done!
Great story, a youngster getting an education. Another chapter would be good.