All Comments on 'Lainey Loves Books'

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ItsalljustforfunItsalljustforfunover 7 years ago
Delicious story

So descriptive, loved it.

curiouscarolecuriouscaroleover 7 years ago
Quiet but hot

Enjoyed the sensual build up and the reality of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Copied?

I have read this story before.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not plagiarized

Published on asstr by the same author.

robinkhinkerobinkhinkeover 7 years agoAuthor
Original work

Yes, I put this on Nifty as well, along with my other two submissions to date. The Nifty version is more liberal with the age gap, but I'm interested in the feedback opportunity Literotica provides. - Robin Khinke

rml65rml65over 7 years ago
Enjoyed!

But wished it was longer! Any chance of adding more? Thanks for sharing!

pennerspennersover 7 years ago
amazing

Really well written. Hoping for more to come.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
pretty good

very well written, I really liked the part where she explained they way when we read books we are looking into their world, it is like the writers here are painting a picture are we can see it when we read it, the only part I did not like was when Angie jumped on lainey at the end of this story she should have controlled herself

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love books!!!

Nice beginning, well written, so imaginative... Hopes she comes back... even if the story does not continue... Thanks.

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeserveover 7 years ago
Fantastic Prose!!!

What an engaging read!

impressive to read a story that is so descriptive and erotic while maintaining a great respect and affection towards the main characters. I really felt like I was in that library.

I hope to see a lot more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very Nice...

Finally...someone hat can write ....please continue Lainey and Angies love affair.....great start....

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mmmm.

This was delightful. Very well written. Will there be more of this story?

RubyRedLipsRubyRedLipsover 7 years ago
Hmmmm...

You are certainly more than the run-of-the-mill recreational writer. Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story, a youngster getting an education. Another chapter would be good.

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