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by Tall_cool_one

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David48David48over 18 years ago
Nice twist

Unintended incest. I'm 57 and know I have a kid out there somewhere, and probably around 40 now as well. Felt as if I was reading about my own trip to the twilight-zone. Very hot, and very emotional(for me anyway). Nice job.

David

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
At least get the title right

'Sitting On The Dock In The Bay' = "Sittin on the Dock OF the Bay"

Give Redding his due.

Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgirover 10 years ago
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Please do a second chapter? There looks to be unfinished business.

:-)

Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgirover 10 years ago
Re: .

Ooops. My bad. I see two other chapters. I feel like a dumbass now.

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
didn't see that one coming

could have fooled me

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