All Comments on 'Landlord'

Good writing style you have out there, but you also have a poor understanding of human psychology and even poorer way of expressing it in your story. Obviously written as a short stroker, but I think Sandee's unwillingness and reluctance could've been exploited to create a better tale and erotica with more conflict.

Pity that you chose the other road. I was kinda dissapointed as I read on till the end.

3* for your story. It was decent.