All Comments on 'Last Chance'

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sassysasha89sassysasha89about 12 years ago

I was hoping for a more positive ending for William's line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
rofl

"Her thoughts were on a totally different subject as she swallowed the abortion pill and was soon waiting as the dead embryo was passed from the safety of her uterus and into her toilet."

Beautifully turned. He went through all that effort and you end the story with an abortion into the toilet. It's like the Alanis Morrisette song... is it ironic or does it just suck?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is a tragedy

Abortion destroys life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Odd but good

Not the most enjoyable story on the site, but perhaps the most imaginative.

I read this a long time ago and thought I would never find it again.

The ultimate "Twilight Zone" of Lit.

5 stars.

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