All Comments on 'Last One of the Night People'

Wonderful story. 5* (What is HEA?)

Happily Ever After. Glad you enjoyed the story... Thanks.

Nice inventive story.

You read fantasy in Literotica and every once in a while there's magic. Not that this was a great piece of literature, but it does a great job of describing the magic that we all hope to find in another person. Two souls come together and meld in several ways and they both go away entranced. We all would like Dorothy to come back and they find a way to stay together, but their lifestyles are too different for that to be realistic. It's enough that they had this magic for one night and give them both something to dream about. And us too. 5*, of course

One Word beautiful

NorthPacific

Makes me want to take a ride down Lake Shore Drive and find the one-armed piano player. Great memories of a nice album, besides a very erotic story. Thanks. Go Bears!

brings back memories of when I was security, and for a while, a roady.

Enjoyable to read. Kept expecting she would turn vampire and thuck hith blud.

Would make a great story in erotic couplings, just not romance material. It was a straight fuck me tale.

I was hoping he'd find her. Somehow, they needed to get together again--if he only learned her last name. Sadly, it didn't happen. However, it's a great erotic story. Five *'s at least. Thanks for posting.

Loved it!!! I think she needs to reappear in the future, ready to enchant him for the rest of his life.

It holds up nicely on the second reading.

My admiration, sir.

That was a wonderful story, magical. The Wizard of OZ was my fav movie growing up. Now I will forever remember your story! Please keep writing, I loved it!!

He was nicer several years ago. If you’d published this in 2020 he’d have fried you with a 3* at best.

Yes ...NEEDs !!!! a follow up .