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DaddyWarBucksDaddyWarBucksover 3 years ago

First of your stories that I have read. You can be sure I will read the others. Great writing, good development of the story, and outstanding explicit sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Superb erotica

Whew . . . a well -written, descriptive piece from a woman’s perspective. Arousing for sure. Kudos to the author.

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesover 3 years ago
Sweet group love story

This was fun, exciting sexy story. Glad it continued with the 3 of you.

My question is based on the sexy voice in which Saki asked if you wanted a ride with them and that you mentioned you had flirted with almost everyone, especially with the description of her and husband; is next chapter going to describe the threesome fun and maybe five person party for New Years

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Very nicely done

roveroneroveroneover 3 years ago

SA-WEET!!

LOVELY 1st 3sum for all...and they all took to it like ducks to water...

5, and fave.

looking forward to your other stories

and like like some fun Similar Stories to the right...

goodcatgoodcatabout 3 years ago

Extraordinary stories from a highly promising writer! Let there be more.

goodcatgoodcatabout 3 years ago

Powerful and descriptive writing, among the best on this site. The female perspective is instructive and valuable.

goodcatgoodcatabout 3 years ago

Powerful and descriptive writing, among the best on this site. The female perspective is instructive and valuable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wonderful writing, very enjoyable.

goodcatgoodcatabout 3 years ago

Writing is skillful, detailed and descriptive. Beyond being merely descriptive, it is sensitive and perceptive, among the best on this site. The female perspective is instructive and therefore valuable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You are a great writer! This story is so sexy, but the characters feel so warm

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

Exquisite perfection.

KeristaFanKeristaFanalmost 2 years ago

Wow.. You're making it tough for the other writers.

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