All Comments on 'Last Will and Testament'

Oh oh oh just want to get my tongue into that hot juicy cunt, more and more please

Good god... That was enticing. Please one more chapter to see how they end up, & since no paternity test... calling each other "daddy" & "baby" works very well for me!! ;o) They "work" great together... so they should end up together in a "happily ever after".

Now we need to know the rest - what did the will say? More, more please. Very good development of the story, but there is more to tell...

and plausible story. You excel as a writer. Thank you.

Is there more to the story? It seems like it is not finished.

Steve

This story is very possible the most believable "incest" story I've ever read on Literotica. You MUST add more chapters and continue with development of the relationship.

WELL DONE!!!

I, too, would very much like to see the rest of this story- if there IS more to tell (it certainly seems like it!). So far everything that I've seen in this particular story is perfectly presented- great dialogue, good narrative, solid writing... wouldn't change at thing... except to see more, of course!

Loved it, I'd get one of those paternity test kits from the drug store and get the results from an outside unknown source. I'd want to know but I can tell you I would have absolutely no regrets or doubts about continuing to bang her daughter or not, if anything I'd get even more charge out of it espeacially if I knocked her up, for that matter I wouldn't have even felt the little pings of guilt at the beginning. I'm a little different in my beliefs, I know, I am one that believes any sex act mutually agreed upon between consenting adults is fair game regardless of sex, race, relationship (as in friends, strangers, directly or indirectly related to the other, whether the family relation is to closely or not to legally marry it is all good to me, whatever floats each individuals boat soceity and their morals be damned) but again I do stress that it be mutually consenting adults

HOT ! HOT ! HOT ! What can I say beyond that? I can't wait for the next episode...

Some times it is just as good not to know if she is his daughter , I have 3 daughters I'm not sure about , but I raised them and love them . Never thought of having sex with them. but it still bothers you and probally untill I die .

He could take her to Gretna Green in Scotland and marry her as long as they are over 16 , and you don't need anyone's consent . Fantastic writing and very believeable ; you really must continue, soon .

please continue the story!! You have my undevided attention

Please continue this story, I loved it

Would love to see this continued, she sounds gorgeous.

LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE IT PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I concur with the previously stated sentiments. I have no idea how the storyline would continue, let alone at the same level of tension, but I have no talent. Here's to muse strike! =D

please don`t stop now!! hurry with the nxt chapters! please thanks Paull

Please write a follow-up Chapter ?

Luv it - what a story.

Thank You.

we want more .... please!

NICE

Another great story and a story line I wish you would follow up on! Love your stories as I am reading them for the first time.

One word........ MORE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!

YOU REALLY NEED TO FOLLOW UP ON A FEW STORIES LINES . YOU CANT LEAVE THIS HANG. i HAVEN'T READ ANYTHING SINCE 84 AND NOW i CANT STOP READING TY

i dont need any more on this one - it was well done and they made love like lovers.

you got a 5.

Great start to a story can't wait for the next instalment

that you continue this in the VERY near future!!

Please tell us, your readers, why you have not continued this story? It simply MUST BE DONE

This story needs a second part to be complete!

Yes, more chapters are needed. They should keep putting off the paternity test to keep up the wonderful tension between them. Maybe have children and when the oldest daughter is16 have the paternity test done.

Keep up the smooth work!

to be continued. I've recently seen your stories and have started reading them. They are well written and draw you into the characters but you need to finish them.

Please! Continue this!

either finish all your stories or delete them all and stop writing and wasting our time with partial stories. half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half. chapter one should have been about matt and debbie as kids. chapter two should have been about debbie and amy up to this point. this should be chapter three and four would bring it to a finish. STOP WASTING OUR TIME.

Maybe she already knew she was his child.

A GREAT WAY TO END THIS

ED

Maybe you should write some stories, I have never read a story written by anonymous

ED

To my mind we can forget those who are so 'Anonymous' that the don't have any more character than their non-existant names.

Your stories have the ability to challenge me and I for one enjoy the cogitation.

Again a 6*

Again I have lost my identity. For those who care I was once logged in as Oleguy.

Bloody computers.!

I have to agree about anonymous posters, if you think you can do better, why fucking don't you? Then we can all enjoy taking the piss out of YOU.

Did you ever thing the author wanted to leave the stories open-ended....to leave a mystery in the mind of the reader? Not to sound snotty, but do you have to tell you everything? Cannt you use your imagination (presuming you have one) to make up your own ending.

For example "mom" said she was pretty wild----who requires that any of the the three guys mentioned are Amy's dad, or that Amy is the daughter of "Mom"

what a waste of time if we need to think of our own beginnings and ends we don't need losers like this one.

I really don't think the feelings and personal in sites of others are relevant. The story you told was very good and appreciated by myself at least. Thank you for your efforts. I read stories here for enjoyment and that lost exciting erotic feeling that I miss in everyday life. I'm now 77 and have experienced "ED" for the past number of years. I often fantasize about younger women and miss the personal contact.

I'm glad we got a glimpse into their lives, but the story ended a bit too abruptly for my taste. Still, good work!

I find myself imagining the next chapter, and can truly say I don't know if I'd have them take that test!

if the reader needs to think up his/her own beginning and/or end it makes the site and writers redundant. it is the writers job and responsiblity to give the readers a complete story if they can't do it they should post anything at all. either delete or finish this now if you don't want to then find a ghost writer to finish it for you just stop being LAZY.

To all the 'ANON' who deign to make suggestions all I can say is get your hands of your privates and let's see you do half as well.

I just dont get anons whiny complaint. Its a fucking short story. The intro was fine and the ending was comfortable enough that it really didnt leave you hanging. Are they related? Did they get tested? Do they really want or need to? It doesnt matter really, that was just a plot piece anyway to make the story what it was.

Its obvious to me they're going to keep having sex, so in my mind they wont get tested. I can legally fuck him and marry him if hes not my dad, right? The kinky bit will always play in too while theyre together and fooling around... Is he my dad? Maybe, maybe not. Im fucking my moms friend or Im fucking my dad. Gets you going either way.

The whole point of the story, imho, in leaving the ending this way, serves that end. Just enjoy it and stfu ;)

gives the reader pause think. according to some of the posts left anonymously, that might be painful for a few.

Is there room for the story to move further forward? Yes! Could it be interesting for the author to share their concept of the future that awaits Mattie and Amy? Hell yes! Is it necessary? Absolutely Not!

Are they related? Does it matter in the greater scheme of things since they have just met? How large is the trust fund? Does Mattie share in the inheritance? If they decide to initiate a relationship who will move to be with the other? What are their occupations? Hobbies? Interests? What did Debbie hope would happen?

These open ended questions, and many more, were left open ended by the author.

Kudos WantSomeFun1951, well done.

If Matt is the executor, having an intimate relationship with the recipient of the trust fund would cause all kinds of legal problems.

It's a story that's unfinished. The complaints are warranted. A literary cock-tease.

it is the lingering doubt. It is the one in three question that make it so intriguing.

Mom didn't know, and she chose to not find out.

She set the two people she respected most up to make their own decisions. Guess what, it is their choice, not ours. And, they have chosen to not choose. Good for them.

To all the rest of us

get over it.

move on.

read more, complain less.

; p

That was beautiful and erotic, and very well written. Thank you for sharing!

should make a story what happend in the future and if me cum inside of her she would be pregment or what write another story.

please write some more of this story. So much yet to happen between these two.

beautifully written

There HAS to be more to the story! An amazing beginning!!!

..., at least there should be more!

These two could go far.

Well done!

MORE!! It's starting to get really juicy - can't leave us hanging now!

WHY !

Loved how you developed the story. I wondered early and often if they would get the test. If it were me writing this story I would not have used her references to Mattie as "Daddy" and left it totally within the readers head. The use of the name "Daddy" just added a little twist from Amy that said "she didn't care". I will be happy if you don't write a sequel and destroy the mental images you left in reader's heads. I like the doubt of incest unanswered. An outstanding story and characters. Thanks for a 5* read. I wouldn't change one word of your story and a sequel is not needed. Thanks for sharing.

needs a follow up leaving the readers hanging !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now regardless of any non-test, he is her Daddy.

Well done. Wow. 2nd story favorited.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

PMG part 2 about the will and "Daddy" ? so good

(1/9/2022) Well...here you go again. I should be upset and confused because you made me enjoy a daddy-daughter narrative...again. I would have avoided these stories if the title or summary contained "Daddy" or "Daughter". Five stars. You're a sneaky sob.

Hawt und Zexxy!

11/10!!!!!

Excellent Read !

You have a Very Creative mind !

THANKS !

Excellent story line. Kind of reminded me of the movie Mamma Mia except for sex. Now for the critique. The preamble was absolutely outstanding, but then the shift to the part about his impure thoughts and the morning wood scene was way too abrupt. Could have been a more gradual segue to the sexual themes. From then on the narrative was pretty much riddled with the standard cliches. Now we need a continuation picking up from when the mail came in. Can't wait . . . .

Great story. Love it. 2nd chapter please. AAAAAA++++++

Surprised I hadn't commented on this the first time I read it. Very lovely, very hot. Great story that I wish had some closure, but is still wonderful even without it. 5*