All Comments on 'Late Ch. 01'

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Love softball and now I love the coach. Sign me up.

Great story can't wait for chapter 2

I enjoy an intense plot development and this story and chapter delivered. Like others here I’m now eagerly waiting for the next installment. Everything is in place for the continuing build up. Is it me or is it getting hot in here?? I’m hooked!

OMG to have a coach like that wow....

So looking forward to Chapter Two

I absolutely love his coach. Where can i sign up for her team? She can punish me anyday for being late. MORE PLEASE

I really appreciate your writing style, and this is a great example of why. You do a great job of squeezing in both dirty talk and how the characters feel, with sexy results! Looking forward to chapter 2!

I really hope that you will continue. PLEASE

This is actually my first comment at literotica, i just couldn't not say WOW to this.

Looking forward for the next chapter

Ohh what an amazing story so far, PLEASE continue this story as soon as possible

While being very much in charge, and about being on top, she actually seems to have a soft spot, or at least care about this guy, beyond sex, at least so far anyway, hope that continues. It would be nice to see that the whole domination thing isn't the only draw towards the main character, and that there's also some real, deeper, feelings there, hopefully at least.

This is an outstanding story. Your characters are interesting and believable, the dialogue and interactions are exciting and really drew me into the narrative. Great work - I can't wait for further chapters

Thanks! You are an incredible writer, I love your works

This was so good, the sexual tension alone got me close

this may be the hottest story i've ever read. seriously. amazing. thanks for sharing on the site. you just made a new fan for life

Awesome! Not often you see a Women Dom with her Tits.

Wow!!!!@ i just love the way you write. I usually go from from story to story. I'm binging everthing you have posted because i am soooooo enjoying your writing. Thank you!!!!!!

Great

Like you warned it wasn't a slam bam thank you maam but every sentence pulled you on and made it more erotic.

It made your want to read more and more

I just started reading this series and I have a REAL good feeling that this is gonna be good! Thanks for writing this!