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All Comments on 'Late for Church'

by ScriptoLobo

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tangledweedtangledweedover 5 years ago
Ha! Ha!

OMFG that dialogue is annoying. HA! HA!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not merely annoying...

@Tangleweed described the dialogue as annoying, and it was. But it also fit the character. She was saying things she’d been raised to be embarrassed by, and her words reflected that embarrassment.

ScriptoLobo got it right. Bien escrito, señor!

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusover 3 years ago
Superb story!

Your dialogue was dead on for the characters described. Breezy. Concise enjoyable. Thanks!

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